Unfold Poem by Aarzoo Mehek

Unfold

Rating: 5.0


Unfold the mysteries of life while there is breath
Strive to unravel the secret of your existence
Explore the inner core of your heart and know thyself
Extricate the burdens of existence and appreciate life.

© Aarzoo Mehek.

Unfold
Friday, July 15, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,mystery
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 15 July 2016

We should all expand our thoughts beyond the trite daily routine

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B.m. Biswas 28 July 2016

well expression and written.. you are right.....we have to discover the essence of very life and existence to overcome the boredom and burden of life.....9 for you as I give 10 to your Pristine Ocean.... a special congratulations for century(100 poems on poemhunter.com) ...thanks.

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Nosheen Irfan 19 July 2016

Amazing succinct piece. Yes, that's the true purpose of our existence, to explore, to unfold the mystery of life. We must think beyond the trivial and expand our vision. High thinking and simple living is a beautiful way of life. I love the touch of Sufism here.10 for this gem!

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Unnikrishnan E S 18 July 2016

Hi Aarzoo, Congrats again, for completing a century of exquisite lovable poems! Great batsmanship! Continue batting and battling!

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Unnikrishnan E S 18 July 2016

Hi Arzoo, Just as was wondering, why there is no new poem from Arzoo, we have got this beautiful philosophical poem. Wonderful. Reflective of the great lines of the yore: Unfold the mysteries of life While there is breath As is said in the Vedas, the very purpose of one's life is to unravel the mysteries of life /world; the truth behind one's existence... Utthishthata, Jaagrata, Praapya varaam Nibodhataa (Wake up/ get up, brighten oneself up and get oneself instructed by the best teacher you can find!) Great poem. Congrats! 10+++

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 July 2016

While there is breath! ! Able to teach others with the works of the truth. After going through many things in life. Nice piece of work.

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