Unlock yourself…
I believe you are more
than what your eyes reveal
and what your smile conveys
Let me reach into your soul
I know there's so much to dig out
A ripeness of emotions to extract
for you are not a book to be judged by its cover
You are deep
Let me dive into the whirlpool
of your smiles and tears
You are not shallow
Let me pick the blossoms beneath your skin.
Nosheen Irfan © 2017
Fantastic poem, the way you explored your lover it reveals a world of your own...
Hi Nosheen, It is said, Beauty is not skin deep. The statement is true about, not just beauty, but about character, friendship etc too. But a soulmate alone can understand you fully. Your value, Your Worth.. Beautifully rendered..
We get only a lop sided idea when we view someone through external vision! But if we probe deeper into the inside, we will be surprised to know that there is much more to him/her and what we got earlier was just a partial view! A profound truth poetically stated!
This is a beautiful love poem. This is what every human wants...to be really SEEN beneath their veils, beneath their skin...for somehow to be able to peer into their souls and truly LOVE how special they are. You've shown your reader there is potential in the human condition. Lovely Nosheen! Pam (Jette)
Let me reach into your soul! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A poem about depth, heavy with its own weight of depth. Much under the surface here, mirroring the imagery of the piece itself. Lovely piece, Nosheen. Bravo!
True everyone has blossoms hidden beneath one's skin...nice of you to point it out
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Let me dive into the whirlpool of your smiles and tears You are not shallow Let me pick the blossoms beneath your skin. wow, what lovely lines do you compose mam, a marvel of art indeed. A classic touch of pure love, passion and an elegant poetic style. 10++++++++ Regards. Subhas