Untold Stories Poem by Tracey TEE

Untold Stories

Rating: 5.0


I'm here again within my dream
amongst the stars aglow,
I search for you among the clusters
Hoping, a sign you'll show.
A billion stars personified
in unison and song,
they seem to guide me to this place
but I feared they were wrong,

'Trust your guides, they know the way '
a voice above me said,
in a quiet wind sweptwhisper
'you must always look ahead'.
'Don't waste time and years in sorrow
find the one your heart did borrow.
for he never leaves you on your own
for he takes you to tommorow '

I feared time would take you away
but once again I'm told
to look into tomorrow
and follow the starlit road
The road your heart belongs to
is how you'll find your star.
Always trust your guides
and I never will be far.

I hear you.. feel you.. touch you
even though you're not aware.
but everytime you're eyes close
By your side I will be there,
Trust your feelings trust your soul
our love will always be yours to hold.

For here I am, your lover... from your stories left untold!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fiona Davidson 08 May 2009

This is so beautiful Tracy...rich in imagery and full of feeling...Fi 10+++

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Emily Oldham 09 May 2009

wow, that's amazing. Full of beautiful phrases and passionate. Thanks, Athena *** words will change the world ***

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 09 May 2009

very expressive and flowing! like Puccini Opera on words!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 10 May 2009

'Trust your feelings trust your soul and love will always be yours to hold. Very nice and lovely poem.10++

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Christine Kerr 13 June 2009

Very intersting story from the other side. Your guides are there to give you strength and you explained this so well. Nice one Tracy 10++

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Shashendra Amalshan 02 June 2009

'I feared time would take you away but once again I'm told to look into tomorrow and follow the starlit road The road your heart belongs to is how you'll find your star' I wish I can find some fallen star at least someday...and i can feel your emotions running through these lines.....and that makes this a touching, moving poem...nice one ma'am...liked it..and felt it too..10++++++ With love and hugs Shan.

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Kesav Easwaran 22 May 2009

Love lines emotive...softly sad yet so loving...beautiful imageries, Tracy...touches the bottom of reader heart for sure...10

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Carl Harris 16 May 2009

This is an absolutely gorgeous poem, Tracy, full of love, passion, and some very outstandingly beautiful writing! Your words seem to soar in this vivid and exceptional poem, so filled with wonderful imagery in each verse. You have told this touching tale as well as it could have possibly been told! Carl.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 15 May 2009

Trust your feelings trust your soul and love will always be yours to hold.....................SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL, love betides by trust of feeling, wonderfully honest and passionate,10+++, thanks for sharing

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