Visibly Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi
Visibly
(dedicated to Mr.Leslie Howard, a great pianist)
The hats
The dogs
The trees
The boats
The ladies
The monkey
The children
The umbrellas
The gentlemen
The social classes
miniature dots
new language
counterpoint
harmony
variation
emotion
perception
heuristics
intensity
color
lines
sad
light
calm
similar
contrary
equivalence
combination
luminous hues
directed upwards
pointing downwards
predominance of warmth
The grass
The water
The faces
The clothes
The activities
The park
The island
The suburb
The landscape
The public garden
(inspired by Seurat's Un dimanche après-midi à l'Île de la Grande Jatte)
you've found different nouns in writing your poem, amazing.. really great work
You have enumerated different arts of nature... Hmm...a different one! ! !
Very Awesome and well expressed. Thanks for sharing -Brie
A novel way of presentation Ahmad - and it certainly catches the eye as would the bouncing notes of the music - it is a quite unique innovation to write after the musical experience and you cleverly represent what you feel in this and your other work - - a top mark from me...... Fay.
nice selection of words......quite different and interesting....thanks for sharing....sebastine...
very unique piece from a unique you....brilliantly done and successfully put me to read and absorb your words...and savor the meaning of your piece as a whole...its wonderful....it seems I'm in the most beautiful place where everything is there....just like music...everything is there...all the feelings.....10+++++ more power....maia
Very nice work, I enjoyed this format and your selection of vocabulary. i like the form you have wrote in making it different and unique :) rgrds maryam
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/7/2025 3:11:07 AM # 1.0.0
All these..has to be visible, indeed... Wonderful poem of deep thought... Thanks for sharing..A 10++!