ahmed khaled


Walk In The Light And Tell The Dark - Poem by ahmed khaled

walk in the light,
let the light walk in you,
and tell the dark,
to be a pillow,
for dreams,
and poetry.


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  • Jacqui BroadJacqui Broad (10/16/2011 2:43:00 PM)

    Yes, true words. Poetry, well most, anyway, get written when we are in a 'dark' frame of mind. But sometimes we get blinded by light, also... (Report)Reply

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  • Allemagne RoßmannAllemagne Roßmann (10/6/2011 4:03:00 AM)

    Very well conceptualized and reminds me of some turkish verses as beautiful lyrics of modernization and its fusion with the oriental minds and trends-it is something like this--
    Son hatiran kaldi bende onuda alsana yar yar
    (Get the last memory of you from me my love)
    Yaptiginla mutlumusun söyle sen bana.
    (Are u happy with what u've done, tell me)
    Gözden uzak dilden irak,
    (far from the eyes and words, /I enjoyed this poem very much.The country of your origin was a part of Turkish Ottoman Empire over 400 years.To some extent i speak the language as i have members from my grandfathers in-laws side from the former empire.Nice write of yours for mine this rememberance..Hats off!
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  • Dave Walker (10/4/2011 2:41:00 PM)

    Great little poem. A very good write. (Report)Reply

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  • Crimson Love (10/4/2011 1:11:00 PM)

    simply beautiful my friend :) (Report)Reply

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  • Dickson MsetiDickson Mseti (10/4/2011 7:17:00 AM)

    hahahaaaaaa! the dark should be for sleeping, even poet have to rest. (Report)Reply

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  • Unwritten SoulUnwritten Soul (10/4/2011 5:00:00 AM)

    Expensive arrangement :) Let dark sleep in you, let it dream for you beautiful poetry..Compact words Ahmed Khaled! -Unwritten Soul (Report)Reply

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  • Vipins PuthooranVipins Puthooran (10/4/2011 1:15:00 AM)

    Excellent write, , economical words but extravagant meaning...
    An inspirational poem...
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  • Miriam Maia PaduaMiriam Maia Padua (10/3/2011 11:25:00 PM)

    Very nice...
    your thoughts are expressive
    wonderfully put into this short and fruitful work...
    intelligent write
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  • Hosny Soliman (10/3/2011 4:25:00 PM)

    As usual so short but very expressive.
    Yes we need to walk toward the light may we can get out our bright
    Yes tell the dark to be till we get all our poetic inspiration.
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  • Stefanie Fontker (10/3/2011 4:15:00 PM)

    Words of wisdom that I will try to follow. Lovely writing, my friend. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 3, 2011

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 4, 2011


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