Wasted Pottery Poem by Indira Renganathan

Wasted Pottery

Rating: 4.8


Lovely pottery
Just for cookery

She bought one
To try

She cooked
Something delicious

He commented
'Uncooked pot'

She's broken
Into shards

Wednesday, September 16, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: commentary,poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 23 September 2020

Beautiful poem, dear Ma'm. Women are so fond of exquisite pottery. To cook a delicious recipe in the lovely pot is an art. A careless comment from a man can shatter the whole endeavour. I would have loved to taste this dish...... :) ......top stars. Thank you for your fabulous comments on my poems. With lots of love to you.

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Mahtab Bangalee 22 September 2020

He commented 'Uncooked pot' She's broken Into shards..........oh! shattered the heart in the breaking pot

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Aarzoo Mehek 16 September 2020

An irrelevant comment from the loved ones breaks the heart. Sweet n simple poem.

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M Asim Nehal 16 September 2020

A fabulous poem, so often we come across such things in life which is not meant for what andwe think it will serve certain purpose but it does not. Nicely conceived poem.5 *

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Varsha M 16 September 2020

Indeed our words can ruin as well as build. It all depends as to how we chose our words. Good metaphorical imagery and insight.

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