Tareq Jalabi

Rookie (20\11\1988 / Russian Federation)

What Is Love - Poem by Tareq Jalabi

Love is an energy
which could not be worn out
but it changes through life
from artist to art
it is the main reason
why a lover has a heart
so loving each other again
we should start
what`s the point of having
wheels without a cart
they might go on
but they will be apart

we have became like
the moon and the sun
when one of us come
the other is gone
i hate my life that
i hope i have a gun
so writing our story
finally will be done


Comments about What Is Love by Tareq Jalabi

  • (9/13/2009 6:47:00 PM)


    Beautiful defenition of love. I really enjoyed reading it! :)
    Allie♥
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  • (8/27/2009 7:03:00 AM)


    '.........................like
    the moon and the sun
    when one of us come
    the other is gone'...

    i liked the pathetic humor inside these lines...good work...thanks...10
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  • (4/28/2009 5:41:00 PM)


    nice piece, well expressed your own feelings, though some effing us words disgrace her slightly, keep writing pearls of wisdom.......rated ten for the love contained within.............. (Report) Reply

  • (2/8/2009 9:44:00 PM)


    This started out so positive, but it ended so sad. With the title, 'What is Love',
    how can that be? It seems that your love has become a sadness. I hope that
    has changed. Your stanzas were quite beautiful. A nice flowing poem to read.

    GW62
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  • (1/2/2009 2:26:00 AM)


    love is really beautiful for everyone..
    this is beautiful work..
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  • (11/22/2008 7:55:00 AM)


    what is love?
    love is like a nightmare, too. hahaha..

    yeah, you rocked with this piece, i love it...

    keep it up! !
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  • Ershad Mazumder (10/11/2008 11:23:00 AM)


    If you want to die
    Fall in love
    If you want to fall
    Raise your head
    And ask the sky
    To vacate
    To create a room
    For a lover
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  • Dorothy- A. Holmes (9/6/2008 4:32:00 PM)


    Hello Blue, I am trying again to send you my comment...trying to recall what I said previously.

    I am pleased that you have the voice and heart of a poet. Happier still that you took pen in hand and not a gun to express yourself. Love really is an adventure, be patient, roses will bloom again.


    Dorothy
    I believe in the power of love...I am, of course, no longer '20'

    Hope this message gets through to you. Here I go again...
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  • (8/11/2008 2:43:00 AM)


    omg that makes me so sad i want to give you a hug (Report) Reply

  • (7/18/2008 6:26:00 AM)


    Wow...i like this poem.. ^^ (Report) Reply

  • (7/11/2008 11:41:00 AM)


    a bit of frustration but you expressed your feelings very well.... wish spring of love bloom in your life...

    Re, a
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  • (7/10/2008 5:09:00 PM)


    dude....ur poems are *WOW*... totally blew me away...........: D (Report) Reply

  • (6/20/2008 12:55:00 PM)


    Very genuine. You show promise. Keep up the good work.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra
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  • (6/19/2008 8:49:00 PM)


    wow! i love this...deep (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 19, 2008

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 21, 2008


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