Love is an energy
which could not be worn out
but it changes through life
from artist to art
it is the main reason
why a lover has a heart
so loving each other again
we should start
what`s the point of having
wheels without a cart
they might go on
but they will be apart
we have became like
the moon and the sun
when one of us come
the other is gone
i hate my life that
i hope i have a gun
so writing our story
finally will be done
Very genuine. You show promise. Keep up the good work. Warm regards, Sandra
dude....ur poems are *WOW*... totally blew me away...........: D
a bit of frustration but you expressed your feelings very well.... wish spring of love bloom in your life... Re, a
Beautiful defenition of love. I really enjoyed reading it! :) Allie♥
'.........................like the moon and the sun when one of us come the other is gone'... i liked the pathetic humor inside these lines...good work...thanks...10
nice piece, well expressed your own feelings, though some effing us words disgrace her slightly, keep writing pearls of wisdom.......rated ten for the love contained within..............
This started out so positive, but it ended so sad. With the title, 'What is Love', how can that be? It seems that your love has become a sadness. I hope that has changed. Your stanzas were quite beautiful. A nice flowing poem to read. GW62
love is really beautiful for everyone.. this is beautiful work..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
wow! i love this...deep