When I'M With You Poem by Jazlle D. H. **contentment is the key to happiness

When I'M With You

Rating: 4.8


When I'm with you I beg,
not to ask me what am I thinking
because it would make me cry
to say it's about you and me.

When I'm with you I beg,
not to ask me why I'm not talking
because I couldn't explain
how much you mean to me.

When I'm with you I beg,
not to ask me what I'm about to tell you
because it could hurt me more
to admit I must stop myself in loving you.

When I'm with you I beg,
not to ask me why I'm letting you go
because it would break my heart
to do the right thing and leave the one I love.


(3rd of June 2008)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tia Maria 29 June 2008

I know, I understand... You will be ok though... trust me

0 0 Reply
Meer Mushfique Mahmood 30 June 2008

I just love this beautiful mind.

0 0 Reply
Hela Jug 01 July 2008

I read you poems, this is my favourite..it made me think about some things.. you are a very good poet.keep it up.

0 0 Reply
PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 03 July 2008

lovely love poem.....10

0 0 Reply
Ravi Sathasivam 06 July 2008

Outstanding poem! You write well. Thanks for sharing Ravi Pls read my poem ' There is a song in my heart'

0 0 Reply
Rachel Butler 04 November 2009

'To admit I must stop myself in loving you' Rachel Ann Butler

0 0 Reply
Maura Sanchez 30 August 2008

I can totally relate... This is a wonderful poem. I love how you convey such convoluted ideas with simple words. Thanksfor posting and im looking forward in reading your new poetry!

0 0 Reply
Kali Abyss 16 August 2008

This poem is really beautiful...to tears... Also like it the last verse =) really good

0 0 Reply
Sarwar Chowdhury 04 August 2008

When I'm with you I beg, not to ask me why I'm letting you go because it would break my heart to do the right thing and leave the one I love. ...amazing amazing! ! ....10+++++

0 0 Reply
Khanyisile Cele 09 July 2008

You write very well and I like most of your poems.

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success