When The Moon Talks. Poem by zeinab sherif

When The Moon Talks.

Rating: 5.0


You forgot me
i see
technology took u away from me
I see
It made u superficial¬ free
I see
It turned u into robots, it killed the true glee

Remember me every day, please
I miss your chitchat which made my soul release
Isolate yourself for a while from technology which made your emotions freeze
&talk 2 me from the window like before
with the scene of the sky &the beautiful breeze.
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 02 July 2009

When the moon talks under the blue we all become sensitive at least! lovely one...

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 July 2009

When the moon talks, there'll be no daylight.................for life.Nice poem Zeinab.I wonder why you banned me.May Allah bless your good deed in generations to come.

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Afzal Shauq 30 June 2009

Remember me every day, please I miss your chitchat which made my soul release Isolate yourself for a while from technology which made your emotions freeze &talk 2 me from the window like before with the scene of the sky &the beautiful breeze. nobody can forget good and sweet people like you the sweet poet with rich emotonal ideas.. appreciate you dear friend for this rich poem...10+++++++++++++

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Allemagne Roßmann 24 June 2009

a while from technology which made your emotions freeze &talk 2 me from the window like before with the scene of the sky &the beautiful breeze...i love it..10+++

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Omar Ibrahim 24 June 2009

fantastic.........i dont believe you are 15! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 25 July 2010

me too, I like this poem like i hear a background music that fits here....

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Kuji Soliman 27 August 2009

i loved this poem so much! ! ! you have a natural gift

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Obinna Eruchie 01 August 2009

A very lovely poem, Zeinab, keep it up.

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Broken Heart 15 July 2009

great poem! ! keep up the awesome writing: D

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Kafil Uddin Raihan 05 July 2009

Really awesome, so lovely heart touching, keep it up mam.......

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