When The Whole World Goes Wrong Poem by Anusha Subramanian

When The Whole World Goes Wrong

Rating: 4.8


Imagine the world going wrong.
Imagine,
The human beings are immobile.
You cannot move. You cannot budge.
You can read this, but you can’t touch the screen.
You can’t open your mouth, or nod your head.

Imagine,
The trees can walk.
They stride right beside you.
You are afraid of being hit by their trunks,
So you try to move, but you cannot move.

Imagine,
The animals can talk.
They go past you, discussing the horror of your life.
You want to shout at them, but no, you can’t stir.

Imagine,
The angels are demons.
They come near you.
You are happy to see them,
But when you realize they are after you,
You want to scream, oh no, you can’t do it.

Imagine,
The demons are angels.
They come to help you.
But you are terrified to see them,
So they take off, leaving you alone.

Imagine,
The sky is about to fall.
You are shocked, you try to shift,
Thinking that you are dreaming,
But no miracle happens as these are real.

Imagine,
All species are carnivores.
They come to feed on you.
You are inches away from them.
And then you realize, to appreciate things in the world for what they are.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Meggie Gultiano 26 September 2009

Your writing style is fascinating.Well penned.You did a good job here. Love and hugs, Meggie

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nature 360 02 July 2009

Imagine.... humans are immobile; Their brains are still active. And the plants, the animals and demons taking advantage to knock you down. Lol Chilling scenario. Fearsome write.

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Frank Longbottom 01 July 2009

I think it was a very good reminder of what we take for granted 10+++ from me

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Ency Bearis 01 July 2009

well written message of awareness...good job...

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Wojja Fink 28 June 2009

a timely reminder for us all...thank you John

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Richard Goolsby 15 May 2010

I Like this on some time i guess we all feel this way i just cant seem to put this kind on paper wish i could

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Vandavasu Vittal 25 October 2009

Wow a thrilling write and excellent ideas. it is true one ust accept how the world is it is good.

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Jen Capaldi 13 October 2009

wow what a write! very chilling. a powerful and imaginative write. great insight. great poem.10's all of the way my friend. Jen

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Nic Leisure 28 September 2009

nice work keep it up...10

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* Stephen *king 26 September 2009

When whole world goes wrong one should dance in sarong...........a good write.

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