Why Can I Not Love You Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Why Can I Not Love You

Rating: 4.7


Ah, why can I not love you?
My love only submits to your love
Like the tide
That could not be stopped
It pushed right into the heart.

Like the streams in spring time
Where water rushed through
As the blood flows into the heart
It creates a melodious song
Only for you.

Like the breeze
That kisses you warmly
And so suddenly
Envelops the heart with so much glee
All because of you.

Ah, why can I not love you?
My heart only beats for you, only for you
You are like the air
Even if I close my eyes
I still feel you
Sweep along my skin
Fill my heart with desire
And I know
I know, my love
That I am alive.


Copyright 2020, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

Friday, February 7, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 17 February 2020

I was very attracted to this- - -> Like the breeze / That kisses you warmly / And so suddenly / Envelops the heart with so much glee. Sounds just like those soft summer breezes! ! And the touch of a loving man. Great write, Rose Marie! 10++

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 February 2020

Quest of love! ! Request and demand! ! ! Waiting, For the Supply! ! ! " Why can't i love you? " Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kesav Easwaran 13 February 2020

Sweet poem. Richly romantic. Full of devotional love totally submissive. Very beautifully crafted 10+

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Aniruddha Pathak 15 February 2020

Now, here is the poet on her favourite wicket, and a century should be in her pocket. A straight drive 'long on' to my fav list...

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Kostas Lagos 07 February 2020

Excellent poem, Rose Marie!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 13 November 2023

It is pure love that keeps one alive and joyful like the scented breeze of vitality. Top marks and to my favourite

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 13 November 2023

A melodious song of love that sweeps into your heart like high tide. A wonderful poem dear Rose.

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Rob Lamberton 10 April 2023

Love rises above all the mighty forces of nature and in fact stands as the source of life itself!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 October 2022

I embrace the ripples of divine expression. Appreciated the philosophical undertones. A great poem.

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Nabakishore Dash 09 January 2022

Excellently described romance in this poem Madam Rose.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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