Wish I! … Live In Your Heart Poem by saadat tahir

Wish I! … Live In Your Heart

Rating: 4.1


Wish I could, just live in your heart.
The human bit and the spiritual part.

In fearless daring, to touch your hair.
The pink cheeks and locks so fair.

To reach out fingers, to those jewels.
Deep blue! Star's and moon's fuels.

In an audacious flair to hold your hand.
And feel as free as the merry band.

With calloused hands, but tender touch.
Need not I fear, nor even a crutch.

With valor to wipe off, those pearly tears.
Snatch away, all your consuming fears

Gallantly tell, the world, all that I feel.
Boldly our love, with a kiss to seal.

With intrepid courage, pick u up.
From fount of youth, to greedily sup.

Audaciously to lay, my heart bare.
Hopelessly entangled in cupids snare.

In rash bravado, to hold u close.
Imbibe one from each, life's dose!

(Islamabad)
(Sep 27,2009)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sathyanarayana M V S 29 September 2009

Well structured passionate poem. Good one. Enjoyed reading it.

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Joseph Poewhit 29 September 2009

Lots of moving passions

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M A 29 September 2009

Sigh...............

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Rehana Nazli 29 September 2009

Wish I could, just live in your heart. The human bit and the spiritual part. A romantic, melodic poem from the depth of your heart...what a sweet and sincere wish for your beloved 6000 km apart/away.

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Lady Grace 29 September 2009

wish i was a child hold me in your arms wish i was a bird warm me with your wings....

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Yasmin Khan 20 July 2013

Very ecstatic and emotive composition...how gallantly you've expressed your wish!

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Meena Mustafa 30 June 2012

Wow! Wow! Wow! beautiful composition.

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Chris Jibero 23 October 2010

Lovely.The heart is best place to live.Well done.

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Sahar Sahar 15 February 2010

beautiful romantic mood, i think you have done beautifully

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Reshma Ramesh 14 December 2009

beautiful.........in the mood doc?

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