Howard The Motivational Poet Simon

Tuesday, August 7, 2012

Without You

Rating: 5.0
A palace is but a shack
Limousine a jalopy
A tuxedo is but rags
Gold is devalued to mud
Riches are but poverty
A garden is a desert
Roses turn out to be thorns
The sun dances in the night
Health is pregnant with illness
Laughter gives birth to crying
Music gives birth to mourning
Gladness gives birth to groaning
Everything becomes nothing
Life is but death without You
Howard The Motivational Poet Simon
A wonderful poem with a meaningful message. A life without God Almighty is meaningless. Living without faith could deliver us to nothingness. Beautifully crafted and well executed.
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Mysia Hayling 03 August 2016
lovely piece truly wonderful
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Nosheen Irfan 10 February 2016
The absence of a loved one can truly make us feel lost n disoriented. An expression of deep emotions through powerful imagery.
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Brian Stafford 07 June 2015
excellent poem, well written with feeling!
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Hazel Durham 25 May 2015
Brilliant write with beautiful imagery, I could really relate to this passionate write!
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Absence of someone loved so much brings forth anguished simple yet powerful.......
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Unwritten Soul 04 November 2012
The phase contrast emerged when someone is not there to be cheers as togetherness..a nice poem, so different the way you do it_Soul
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Candymarie Nevin 04 November 2012
i really like this poem there is alot of meaning behind it.
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Walterrean Salley 01 November 2012
Could be spiritual or natural, seeing that one could lose in so many ways. I have lost loved ones, which left me feeling totally lost. Amazing how powerful the emotional connection. Well done.
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Antonio Liao 24 October 2012
the awkward of love comes in between stanza, sacrifice maybe but the essence of life lives in the most unexpected way. A Deep cooled breath of experienced recall...
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