...Woman Poem by Eyan Desir

...Woman

Rating: 5.0


One man closed his eyes,
God took one rib and
Gave birth to a woman.
Perfectly curved from clay
With two luscious lips
One womb to bear
Her fruits and please.
Two oranges were placed,
On her chest to mother.
So Special sometimes kind
Her beauty makes men blind
That is a Woman.


Fools rush in like flies,
Some are hypnotized
A flower in our eyes
Her love is so divine
Angels without feathers
Serpents in the grass
That is a woman.
Mother of the earth
Let all men take note
They are good and bad
Some may make us cry
Sometimes we wish to die,
But give thanks to God
For making us a woman

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pink Butterfly ... 25 March 2009

A wonderful tribute to women like us! So lovely.... Thanks for sharing!

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I really enjoyed your poem. You have used wonderful imagination to bring alive a woman. It is this unique style that makes this poem a 10. Karin Anderson

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Rajaram Ramachandran 25 March 2009

The word 'Man' is hidden inside the word 'Woman' So there is no man without woman or there is no woman without man.

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Maria Barbara Korynt 25 March 2009

Your poem will always be still standing. What would world be worth without the woman? Good topic, good workmanship. Greetings. :) Maria Barbara Korynt

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Jihad T 24 March 2009

good description for women i love the way you talk about it nice poem and keep writing on

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 23 April 2009

Facinating read, glad you still have faith in meeting a WoMan. ...

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Demon lover 27 March 2009

Hell yea! ! ! ! I love it! every guy should read this

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Roshni D'Souza 26 March 2009

Ah yes, the beauty and controversy of a woman! Nice write!

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Rajkumar Mukherjee 25 March 2009

Dear Desire, Nouvel presentation. But there is no fulfilment to one without the other. Perhaps, that's why your title goes like WoMan. Man interwoven in woman The image of serpent, perhaps, does not fit here. Thanks for sharing Rajkumar

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Lt Feitosa 25 March 2009

The poem is a tribute to women but serpent...well...well...well...very creative!

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