Y... As We Can Poem by Aufie Zophy

Y... As We Can

Rating: 4.9


Doing something pleasant
Doing something unpleasant
Let's do it as well as we can.

Talking to someone nice
Talking to someone rude
Let's talk as well as we can

Praying in glory
Praying in frustration
Let's pray as well as we can

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vipins Puthooran 30 December 2011

as well as we can.... Great message Beautiful narration! ! !

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Eric Cockrell 30 December 2011

'...as well as we can...' great message!

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Rekha Mandagere 29 December 2011

What a wisdom you are giving with simple touching, decorations! .Your poem is really pleasant, nice, glorious and drives away frustration. Great work for the new year. Must give marks 10+Rekhamandagere

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 28 December 2011

Brilliant poem man...thanks for sharing..and thanks for reminding us to do good..

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Virginia Pecho Gely 28 December 2011

There is a philosophy in life: DO THE BEST YOU CAN WHATEVER HUMBLE IS THE TASK. This gives meaning to one's existance. Thanks Aufie for this poem simply written but the message therein is as deep as the ocean....Thanks for sharing.

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Lawrence H 25 January 2012

Good and nice poem...but if you can put more verse/ stanza about As we can is better. E.g. Eating something healthy, eating slowing, Let's eat as well as we can....

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Tanja Bulovic 06 January 2012

Beautiful and inspirational.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 05 January 2012

wisdom well coined in the poem

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Sajna Kailas 04 January 2012

wow, this is a nice poem and a good message for the new year! thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us! God Bless You! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Vipins Puthooran 30 December 2011

as well as we can.... Great message Beautiful narration! ! !

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