You Killed The Intensity Of My Feelings! Poem by Aarzoo Mehek

Emotionless; into coldness. Left with no laughter! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

For every happy smile you smile I shed heartbreaking tears For you seem to run away from reality Hiding behind some fears.............really a reality....each and every line full of Deep emotions and harsh reality of a relationship.....thank you for sharing :)

In love, emotions have to mutual, and hopeful of the same degree of intensity. Recipocration is perhaps the second most important aspect in love after compromises (as I see it) .. You have beautifully described how we suffer when the one we love does not reciprocate.. It is something that does happen.. Manipulations, avoidance, making us feel guilty for being right at times! ! - they all gradually lead to a point when we finally try to hold them accountable for the damages they do to us.. And then, just then, they run away like hypocrites... A beautiful poem Arzoo.. Thank you for sharing.

Another masterstroke by the Tragedy Queen.....Every word is dipped in pain and every line will make him ashamed provided he reads it with open mind and closed heart.....Lovely poem Aarzoo, nothing goes in vain, I recall the experiment we did in class 8th...where we took three different items to check the boiling point and their reactions. Egg - became soft from outside and hard inside. Potatoes: Soft from inside and outside Sugar: Lost its identity by melting and making water sweet....Your poem reminded me that experiment today.

Your indifference towards me Has killed the intensity of my feelings I can easily feel the sense of dejection you experience when one who you expect to share your joys and sorrows turns indifferent and doesn't bother to care for your feelings! Indifference from a loved one can make anyone stony and morbid! Intense feelings are so powerfully portrayed!

Like a pack of cards I feel my whole life crumbling to the ground..how beautifully you describe the sense of being wronged. After betrayal n heart-break that's exactly how one feels. Beautiful write my friend. And an amazing graphic to complement your feelings.