Your Glance Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Your Glance

Rating: 5.0


The sound of footsteps
Echoed round the wall
The love's death
Cast blight on my all
Years of being left out in the sin
Rusts my thin heart within

Please
Give me a chance
Threw the flashlight beam
Into my heart
Your glance

(2008/9/25)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
anne adam 27 September 2008

i love this lovely poem it's so ture i love it

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Seema Chowdhury 27 September 2008

years of being left out..... excellent poem. a 10. eid mubarak.

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Lynda Robson 26 September 2008

You always write such beautiful poetry, if I looked into your heart I would see love and kindness and a wonderful human being, 10 Lynda xx

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Anjali Sinha 26 September 2008

oh so sweet! ! ! ! flashlight beams and your glance. ++++10 as always regards anjali

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Koyel Mitra 25 September 2008

A lovely poem.Love can clear the blight in mind.A 10!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 09 October 2008

A beautiful poem, last stanza is nice.

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Mencita Monoï Angel Carmen 08 October 2008

a bautiful glance....

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Jessica Rosalie Smith 04 October 2008

i love the lines 'the love's death cast blight on my all' it speaks volumes about the impact of lost love good job =)

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Vilma Xelin 30 September 2008

very sublime.... I love it!

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Viola Grey 28 September 2008

it's amazing how bright the light when seen through desire's eyes...lovely write

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