The sound of footsteps
Echoed round the wall
The love's death
Cast blight on my all
Years of being left out in the sin
Rusts my thin heart within
Please
Give me a chance
Threw the flashlight beam
Into my heart
Your glance
(2008/9/25)
years of being left out..... excellent poem. a 10. eid mubarak.
You always write such beautiful poetry, if I looked into your heart I would see love and kindness and a wonderful human being, 10 Lynda xx
oh so sweet! ! ! ! flashlight beams and your glance. ++++10 as always regards anjali
i love the lines 'the love's death cast blight on my all' it speaks volumes about the impact of lost love good job =)
it's amazing how bright the light when seen through desire's eyes...lovely write
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i love this lovely poem it's so ture i love it