Your Man-To-Be Poem by Esther Leclerc

Your Man-To-Be

Rating: 5.0

Right out there in front of all the world,
he opened his beautiful mouth to me:
'OH BABAAAAAY! ............... (cue the drums) ,
I Am Your Man-To-Be... '

So, I did what any self-respecting music
lover would do when faced with such a man
and his raging longing, focused
directly on this woman:

I threw bra n' panties on the stage and then I
danced sans inhibition which brought him to
his knees, begging, 'Ooo, baby, please! ' and
then he joined me in the crowd, it was hot and
it was loud, but it really meant nothing cause
he knew how to do that thing... and on and on the
moment went until we both were crazy-spent...

Sometimes they really do: fantasies can come true.


Way to go, way to dream, girl! ! ! ! - As a piece this is vivid, exciting, entrancing, exhilterating and liberating; with superb flow. t x

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Brian Dorn 28 September 2006

It's 'More Than Love'... more like an obsession (with musicians) ! You rock, Esther! ! Brian

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R H 28 September 2006

You have the ability to engage the reader, draw them it, tease and amuse. A wonderfully crafted piece, the energy flows out of this Esther. Only in dreams are we truly free...Justine

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Ernestine Northover 28 September 2006

Sounds a wonderful dream to me Esther! How come you are so lucky! Beats a bar of chocolate any day! Loved it. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 10 October 2006

Great Piece...AWESOME LYRICALS, Esther>>>And the swagger? That's cuz YOU HAVE Confidence.AND WELL YOU SHOULD, BASED ON YOUR GIFT OF THE 'SILENT WORD''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Esther Leclerc 03 October 2006

You're right (t'was 'And then I woke up') , so I've changed it. Thanks for the constructive criticism - always welcome! Est: ]

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Chuck Audette 03 October 2006

Sounds like a fun time, but I have to confess I am not really fond of the last line... 'and then I woke up' - a little too flat/predictable? -chuck

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Alison Cassidy 29 September 2006

Wow Esther, your inner child (or perhaps inner adolescent) is certainly to the fore in this imaginative dream written in your recognizable style with abandon and ebulience. Wonderful penning. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Duncan Wyllie 28 September 2006

E very S pecial T eacher H as E motional R eads Thankyou for the emotion in so many of your writes, love duncan XXX

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Esther Leclerc

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