[03] On The Hill Top Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

From a top you see lot of things, really touching.

'Passionate' poetic journey from hill top to pillow side...nice write Ashraf...thanks...10

A touching, beautiful write, love does have the tendency to break down but goes on living in some different shape.10+++

Walt Whitman would be smiling. your passion gleams through, very nice 10

reminsiscent poetry so full of passion and emotions... : -) keep writing...

I will never know who they were But now I always feel An unseen impatient spore At old-night inside my pillow... love to read, , nice poem 10 it may revive when it survives one feels and believe when memories rush and relive

A lovely poem........... U get 10++++++++...............

old night inside my pillow... it feels great to read this phrase. it is full of emotions, pictures, and memories. thanks for sharing. great write, sir!

maarvellous...i love the way youve formatted the poem..disjointed abstract...adds tpo the sadness and abruptness of love gone bitter.....amazing write..

will never know who they were — Always feel an unseen spore At old-night inside my pillow..... many lovers perish without telling their stories to wrold. this is tagedy..... i admire their courage and parting ways....10 'How are you' is written by me ingood humour