2 Don'T Blaspheme. Poem by Alf Hutchison

2 Don'T Blaspheme.

Rating: 5.0


Written as a wall plaque.

WHEN YOU ENTER THIS DOMAIN,
AND YOU WISH HERE TO REMAIN,
I ASK YOU PLEASE THEN TO REFRAIN
FROM USING MY LORD'S NAME IN VAIN.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Louis Rams 17 November 2009

THIS SHOULD BE PUT AT THE CHUCH ENTRANCE. EXCELLENT A TEN

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Luwi Habte 17 November 2009

these are just words.. but there i can see some thing is telling.. so nice piece dear luwi

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Stephen Stirk 17 November 2009

A great, concise piece Alf. Not one word wasted, and yet says it all such a poetic way. A definite 10 Best Steve

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Eyan Desir 16 November 2009

not what i expected...good write

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Seema Chowdhury 16 November 2009

that is such a nice and thoughtful piece. thanks for sharing.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 November 2009

WHEN YOU ENTER THIS DOMAIN, AND YOU WISH HERE TO REMAIN, I ASK YOU PLEASE THEN TO REFRAIN FROM USING MY LORD'S NAME IN VAIN..so much said inso shortand that too worth for whole life... beauftiful and reflects the presence of noble thoughts..i likeditandadmire it....10 read mine inch by aninch..not easy..beautiful world

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Lee Crowell 28 November 2009

nice work Alf I like the directness, no holds barred approach too many poems are filled with vague imagery, not this one Lee

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Elbert Matt Loubser 24 November 2009

I'll put that plaque on my wall. People do not realise that the Lord's name is holy, they do not know what they do, they do not know how it affects the world around us and the spiritual world.

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Henry Brown 22 November 2009

Powerful message for a lost world. This message could be an eye opener to some believers as well

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 20 November 2009

Also...perhaps-first and foremost- be placed in the hearts of the believers.10+++ Thanks for sharing!

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