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30 वर्ष की उम्र होने पर (Hindi Traslation Of S.Zaynub Kamoonpuri's Poem)

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Thoughts On Turning 30
by S.zaynub Kamoonpuri
Translated in Hindi by Rajnish Manga

30 वर्ष की उम्र होने पर
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30 वर्ष की उम्र होने पर (Hindi Traslation Of S.Zaynub Kamoonpuri's Poem)
This is a translation of the poem Thoughts On Turning 30 by s.zaynab kamoonpuri
Friday, June 10, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: death,fears,old age ,poem,birthday
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Transliteration of above Poem in Roman alphabet

Janmdiwas par de sakte hain vo mujhe badhai
Ya kah sakte hain ‘baar baar din ye aaye'
Mere priyjan dete hain tohfe aur shubhkaamnayen
Tatha badhai bhi dete hain
Us jiwan ke liye jo bhagta hi jaata hai?
Aah! Yahi sab dekh niraash main ho jaati hun
Jiwan ka ghat aadha reeta hi dikhta jab
Aadha bhara nahin dikhai deta mujhko.
Sach kahti hun janmdiwas mujhko lagta hai
Vriddhavastha ki or badhaaya ek kadam
Bhayavah mrityu ki or badhaaya ek kadam
Bemani hai dekhun aage ki khushiyaan ya umra ki thakawat
Jab snigdh twacha ho jaayegi papdi yukt, jhurriyon waali
Nirbal honge haath pair aur nirbal ho jayega tn.
Atah mujhko apna har ik janm diwas
Lagta jiwan ke antt ki or badhaaya ek kadam
Vah kadam jo mujhko le jaayega boodhepan ki asthirta me
De jaata hai durbalta vah vapis fir se bachpan ki
Jo jiwan ki sfurti ko hi le jayega
Behtar mujhko lagta hai na manaun usko
Jab humm nikat ho rahe hain us pal ke
Jisme yaaden flashback me dekhen hum
Aur man hi man me jiwan ki parten kholen
Har vastu jab dhal jaati hai kewal dhundhli smritiyon me
Fursat me humm smriti chnhon ko ulten palten

Isi liye har janm diwas hai lagta mujhko
Kabragaah ki or badhaaya ek kadam saa
Sambhav hai yah raah bahut hi lambi ho
Yaa durbhaagya se maut
Shortcut se le jaaye
Swarg me ya nark me!
Fir chaahe ho vo mahakavi ya aam aadmi!
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 04 August 2016

Beautiful flow of words, good in rhyming. Beautiful lines... ??????? ?? ???? ???? ?? ???? ????? ??????? ?? ?? ?????? ?? ??? ?? ???? ?? ?? ??? ???? ?? ???? ?? ?? ????????? ?? ??? ?????-?? ?? ?? ???? ?????? ??? ?? ???? ???! ??? ???? ?? ?? ?????? ?? ?? ????! Loved reading it.

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Rajnish Manga 11 August 2016

So nice of you to have read this poem '30 ???? ?? ???? ???? ??' and have appreciated the translation. Thank you, Geetha ji.

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Aarzoo Mehek 22 June 2016

??????? ?? ???? ???? ?? ???? ????? ??????? ?? ?? ?????? ?? ??? ?? ???? ?? ?? ??? ???? ?? ???? ?? ?? ????????? ?? ??? ?????-?? ?? ?? ???? ?????? ??? ?? ???? ???! ??? ???? ?? ?? ?????? ?? ?? ????! Zindagi ka karwa sach jisko jhutlaya nahi jaa sakta... khoobsurat transleration.... dheron daad.o tehseen aapko aur Zaynub Kamoonpuri ko bhi.

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Rajnish Manga 11 August 2016

?? ???? ?????? ?????? ?? ??? ????? '30 ???? ?? ???? ???? ??' ?? ?????? ??? ??. ???? ?? ????? ?? ??? ???, ??? ????????????? ???. ???? ??????? ??????? ?? ?????????? ?? ???? ??? ??? ??? ?? ???? ????? ???.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 14 June 2016

Hindi looks so artistic, so unlucky i have forgotten how to read it as my mom taught me only a bit at home as overseas schools don't teach it. So pls do send me a transliteration then i wil undrstand n enjoy. From the coments i see u have done such a superb work that has been complimented! Best wishes.

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M Asim Nehal 13 June 2016

Kya badhiya translation kiya hai aapne......Ye Translation padhkar mujhe apni ek kavita yaad aagayi..... http: //www.poemhunter.com/poem/-9837/ Ye kavita maine apne janam divas pr san 2012 mein likha hai...?? ??? ?? ?? ??? ??? ???????? ?? ???? ????..... -

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Rajnish Manga 11 August 2016

???? ?????? ?? ??? ????? '30 ???? ?? ???? ???? ??' ?? ???? ??? ???? ??????? ?? ???? ???? ????????, ???? ??. ???? ?? ???? ????? ????? ???? ??? ???? ????? ??? ?? ???? ?????? ???? ??? ???? ???? ?????. ????? ?? ?? ??. ?? ???? ????? ?? ???? ???? ??. Thanks.

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Akhtar Jawad 13 June 2016

Rajnish Manga is next to none in translating poems of various languages in Hindi. This lovely Hindi poem is an evidence of it.

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Excellent translation, Rajnish ji! it was a pleasure reading this poem. So very, very true. Each day, we are moving towards death! Wonderful poem!

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Rajnish Manga 11 June 2016

Thanks for your wonderful comments, Geeta ji. This is like receiving a reward for your efforts.

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