Thursday, June 18, 2009

A Curse From An Angel Comments

Rating: 4.8

oh heaven above
forgive this man who takes me down
he doesn't feel the pain inside
nor to see the aching heart...
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COMMENTS
Tom Golding 23 March 2018

My apologies for the looong delay, health problems of decrepitude. Will not comment on poem but you are not doing justice to your work by the flat monotone which detracts from otherwise fine work. Tom Golding

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Intense poem…swing and de-swing… Voted 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Ejaz Khan 11 September 2009

A poem both intense and meaningful, rich imagery and clear message, you have narrated so many different things in a beautiful way, very nice write!

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rago rago 06 July 2009

how nice to read a curse from an angle...... sometimes also love and affection on us....please donot curse us.......... very beautiful.......... to differenct topic....

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Jack Price 05 July 2009

All I can say is this is a great poem. I lose myself in your imagery and it makes this poem so believalbe.

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Kristina B; Williams 29 June 2009

i swear we must of dated the same m.f., cuz word by word you sum up me n his relationship up to a tee...adding a few more, promise they are secure..spent all night ordering systems to perfect me from all this wierd stuff..10, for curese of an angel

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Rosalita Fernandez 27 June 2009

Wow- this is amazing! truely amazing. powerful! 10 plus

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Rafique Farooqi 25 June 2009

the poem is with beautiful structure and word placed skillfully.......10+

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L.P. Alexanders 25 June 2009

i loved it, great content and message keep up the good work! ! 10++

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Rebecca Harvey 23 June 2009

Grace i think you are someone a little like me you have been hurt by someone you lived and thought they loved you and also like you i put my emotions and feelings in to my poetry and not take my pain out on people i would love it if you could read my poems just look under poets and my name and you can look at the ones i have wrote and you can tell me what you think and see what i mean

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Ravi A 23 June 2009

After our death what will happen to planet earth? It doesn't matter to anyone who is dead. One day this planet will dissolve with the universe. Another cycle would begin. A good poem.

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Mark Curtis 22 June 2009

Love it! ! never thought about using a theme like this one...but will from now on, thanks Mark

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Ria Vasavan 21 June 2009

Grace , beauitful thoughts , nice writes . Hats of to you , for having such a wonderful creation .

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Meer Mushfique Mahmood 21 June 2009

Dear, may we take a project to 'suppress earthly moves of the hearts made of thorns..'. You have a transcended heart (not only tortured mind) . Won't you turn your emotion to power to heal both the people tortures and are tortured?

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Naidz Ladia 21 June 2009

ssshhhhh, ok..this is what i have observed..too much anger is inside the heart of the author..wait, , dont get mad..ssshhhhhh nice coz you make urself lose from your past..i could feel the hatred, anger in ur heart...but be strong sweetheart...be strong...naizz

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Jaleel Perinjanam 21 June 2009

Fantastic... Fantasy on romantic wings. Dreadful but beautiful thoughts. Well done.

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Howard Kern 20 June 2009

Lady Grace ' I am the angel of death' surely not! ! ! Do not spend valuable time in the death cycle. Let your light shine for all to see. Find the love in your heart and forgive yourself.

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Vanita Thakkar 20 June 2009

Nice, powerful expressions. Keep going.

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MAGNUS ABRAHAM-DUKUMA 20 June 2009

...silky word talent. Nice poetry.

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Aijaz Asif 20 June 2009

' I'm the angel of love but you call me angel of death I'm in the search of those who are lost but you think the hunt is on I travel every where around the clock to fulfill my Masters will I'm lover to only those who has devoted them self to Him I'm the killer, I'm the wrath for those who are happy to reside in swamp of sins ' - asif it's very powerful and moving write Grace and I liked it, thanks for sharing 10++++++ and A+++++++ rgds asif

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