oh heaven above
forgive this man who takes me down
he doesn't feel the pain inside
nor to see the aching heart...
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Intense poem…swing and de-swing… Voted 10 Ms. Nivedita UK
A poem both intense and meaningful, rich imagery and clear message, you have narrated so many different things in a beautiful way, very nice write!
how nice to read a curse from an angle...... sometimes also love and affection on us....please donot curse us.......... very beautiful.......... to differenct topic....
All I can say is this is a great poem. I lose myself in your imagery and it makes this poem so believalbe.
i swear we must of dated the same m.f., cuz word by word you sum up me n his relationship up to a tee...adding a few more, promise they are secure..spent all night ordering systems to perfect me from all this wierd stuff..10, for curese of an angel
the poem is with beautiful structure and word placed skillfully.......10+
i loved it, great content and message keep up the good work! ! 10++
Grace i think you are someone a little like me you have been hurt by someone you lived and thought they loved you and also like you i put my emotions and feelings in to my poetry and not take my pain out on people i would love it if you could read my poems just look under poets and my name and you can look at the ones i have wrote and you can tell me what you think and see what i mean
After our death what will happen to planet earth? It doesn't matter to anyone who is dead. One day this planet will dissolve with the universe. Another cycle would begin. A good poem.
Love it! ! never thought about using a theme like this one...but will from now on, thanks Mark
Grace , beauitful thoughts , nice writes . Hats of to you , for having such a wonderful creation .
Dear, may we take a project to 'suppress earthly moves of the hearts made of thorns..'. You have a transcended heart (not only tortured mind) . Won't you turn your emotion to power to heal both the people tortures and are tortured?
ssshhhhh, ok..this is what i have observed..too much anger is inside the heart of the author..wait, , dont get mad..ssshhhhhh nice coz you make urself lose from your past..i could feel the hatred, anger in ur heart...but be strong sweetheart...be strong...naizz
Fantastic... Fantasy on romantic wings. Dreadful but beautiful thoughts. Well done.
Lady Grace ' I am the angel of death' surely not! ! ! Do not spend valuable time in the death cycle. Let your light shine for all to see. Find the love in your heart and forgive yourself.
' I'm the angel of love but you call me angel of death I'm in the search of those who are lost but you think the hunt is on I travel every where around the clock to fulfill my Masters will I'm lover to only those who has devoted them self to Him I'm the killer, I'm the wrath for those who are happy to reside in swamp of sins ' - asif it's very powerful and moving write Grace and I liked it, thanks for sharing 10++++++ and A+++++++ rgds asif
My apologies for the looong delay, health problems of decrepitude. Will not comment on poem but you are not doing justice to your work by the flat monotone which detracts from otherwise fine work. Tom Golding