A Diary Three (La Isla Tango) Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

A Diary Three (La Isla Tango)

Rating: 2.7

(dedicated to Ms Seema Aarella, a poet friend at poemhunter)

I rise up rejoicing in sparkling evening
when I touch your pure heart
to see you with each love
is better than dreaming

while the Spring wind cooled us
with your voice, my heart in bliss
with your smile, my soul inspired
You to me like an oasis on desert

to every beautiful place and time
she makes me the first of heroes
my spirit is glad beyond all measure
I will not tear myself and yourself away

Ruerd Visser 14 February 2009

May your love speak of love alone so we forget the darkness of not being loved enough. Thanksgreetings from Sneek Boomfriend Ruerd

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Muhammad Ali 14 February 2009

Pretty work dear Ahmed. admireable

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Naidz Ladia 14 February 2009

its beautiful, , ..expressed well the way you sway....cheers naizz

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Fay Slimm 13 February 2009

I can hear the tango in this Ahmad - - and as a tribute bound around in beautiful words it works very well...... thank you for sharing.......10 from Fay.

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Gargi Saha 24 February 2009

A wonderful poem..........10++++++ Love & hugs.

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Seema Chowdhury 14 February 2009

very n ice poem welldone.

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Ency Bearis 14 February 2009

nice job for Seema..nice verses....

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Catrina Heart 14 February 2009

A token of appreciation from all the love and care shared in this wonderful family...10+++

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Seema Aarella 14 February 2009

dear Ahmad am i really worth these lines? ....i still stare in disbelief! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! and i bow in defeat in front of your mighty heart! All of us here are lucky to have seen in you a sensitive poet and a compassionate human! I salute ur spirit! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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