A Falling Soul Poem by Dave Alan Walker

A Falling Soul

Rating: 5.0


A soul falling deeper
and deeper into despair
calling out for someone
to be there

As the souls merge as one
to relight and raise
the falling soul
a peaceful calm engulfs
the earth

As they all rise together
they all know,
unlike the living they will
always be one

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eric Cockrell 05 June 2012

therein lies the hope of humanity! thought provoking!

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Heather Wilson 05 June 2012

Another soul for group therapy, a write to think about.good one.

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Smoky Hoss 05 June 2012

Very good Dave, so well put!

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Simon Collins 06 June 2012

This poem works for me, thanks

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Captain Cur 18 June 2012

Rattle the chains. Short but potent. Lots of meaning here.

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Noreen Carden 17 September 2013

A great write Dave well done never was there a greater need for souls to unite than now enjoyed reading this

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Geetha Jayakumar 27 July 2013

Beautiful poem...Calling all souls to unite..Great write.

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Patricia Grantham 27 February 2013

Hello Dave: A thought provoking poem, this one really gets to the soul of the matter(smile) . I definitely like it! Thanks.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 17 February 2013

The poem is pure and sterling, motivating all souls to unite and be one! ! GREAT! !

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 25 June 2012

calling all souls to unite............special piece! !

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