A Fleeting Thought Poem by Chuck Audette

Aren't we all just little sparrows and now with technology so cheap, we all, on 'Twitter' tweet, tweet, tweet..... but for this little sparrow, please, write more poems such as these; -) Ruthy (alias 'Little Sparrow' come read mine...please) : -) (oh gosh, I do hope you've heard of 'Twitter' it's this new internet site you see, where people write down their thoughts...otherwise you might think I'm completely out of my tree, heh heh)

Wonderful use of metaphor. The loveliness of your fleeting thought lingers in the mind. Warm regards, Sandra

this haiku looking seemingly innocous devouring depth of thought good work Chuck

I've always found sparrows to be rather insignificant little things, your poem brings them to life though. HG: -) xx

Very nice my dear...at what age did you first notice this? (smile) Dorothy

Well conceived and nicely encapsulated with insight. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing, Chuck.

A fleeting thought, perhaps, but the one that most definitely lingers....less is more and every single word here counts. Lovely Chuck...

Days move in ages, and time in moments; sparrows live many days, but a song is gone in a moment of wonder. BEAUTIFUL poem Chuck.

This little gem is brief, but rich and enduring.

Your touch is as light as a feather here...well done.