A Float... Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

i love this Kesav! ....and it's up to us what direction to paddle.....

Very sensible and powerful write, my friend. Very well done as always! : -)

amidst the current and shores we float...balance and float...a lot said in those four lines.....10 +

Short, sweet and powerful. Long back I have written a similar essay in hindi depicting life as a river with joy and sorrow as its two shores.... and there is a small poetry with a similar feel, which I shall post soon. Thanks. Vanita.

'In between floats, life barge to and fro' you are an utter philosopher.

how well you have captured the essence of life..brilliant

Says so much in so few lines, great poem x

You have packed such a lovely message into these 4 lines. Beautiful!

profound thoughts in four lines simply sublime!

Great philosophy! Very much sounds like right from our UPANISHADS.......