A Healthy Life Aria Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

A Healthy Life Aria

Rating: 3.3


who knows?
keep writing!
keep on rhyming!
enjoy your life!

who knows?
keep trying!
keep on moving!
sense your love!

who knows?
keep going!
keep on searching!
feel your energy!

who knows?
keep singing!
keep on dancing!
touch your aura!

who knows?
keep drawing!
keep on blushing!
shine your charm!

what a frozen Winter heart!
let me warm it for your beauty
what's the use of sharp looking?
we won't act it in a dark mood

wait, sweetheart
it's a moonlit night
an Eastern moon
is near our spirits here

who we are?
we are poets
what we do?
we paint words

how we live?
we beautify life
when we really enjoy?
if we redecorate rhymes

love songs comes
to irregular visions
to irresistible dreams
to crowned castles in heaven

we've a soul of gentle air
our distance hopes
our delicious synergies
melted at once into a nostalgic fog

let's rejoice in peace!
let fate smile upon us!
tender and beautiful blossoms
of my beloved plain, tree of love

may thunder, lightning, flood, and storms
never bother you, O dear oceanic hearts!
nor may you be profaned by blowing winds
or shade of a crisis on your turbulent activities

cheer to other!
sweeten to unknown!
smile for awhile!
kind for beloved!

variety to improve
harmony to share
freshness to explore
exhale, inhale to groove

show your love!
grow your confidence!
paint your balance!
spread your prayer!

much ado
about caring
precious style
in your own trail

once upon a time
in a twilight cell
ring your bell!
have a good time!

(dedicated to a great poet at poemhunter, Rajaram Ramachandran)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruerd Visser 12 April 2009

Keep painting those words with your oceanic heart. And we´ll all make a new start. It´s like we´re on a yourney step by step to uncover those veiled truths that until now eluded us. I have come to believe that God is Generating our divinity, saving the holy trinity of mind, body and soul. And i contemplated this easter on some food for my thougth: we will continue to live in a world of hurt, for as long as we insist on hurting those that cause hurt. Harm is going to come our way, for as long as we insist on harming those that cause harm. It´s often a vicious cirkel we are beginniing to break now that Obama is president, let us hope he not only opens doors that remained shut for us as long as we persisted on vengeance and payback. But that we find the courage to enter the realm of forgiveness. Otherwise we envoke the spirit of oblivion to consume us all. Eastergreetings from Friesland Boomfriend Ruerd

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Anthony Foster 12 April 2009

The size and tempo changes which matches the discriptive content. Very good

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Sally Plumb 12 April 2009

I have already commented on this poem.Cheers!

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Chitra - 12 April 2009

uplifting one, each line has a positive value to it

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Sebastine Humaemo 12 April 2009

meaningful write....with plsnt flow of words.......splendid write....10+ sebastine

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‘who we are? /we are poets/what we do? /we paint words’ A Tall Yeah… ‘Poets enliven words Poets bring life to dead words Poets add jingle to words Poets bring vive in heart of readers Finally Poets merges with and in words’ ~ niv Excellent poem Sir 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Joshua Whiting 14 November 2009

Lilting, staccato, cresendo, decresendo - Aria Arbitrio! stay positive, Joshua C.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 November 2009

who knows? keep writing! keep on rhyming! enjoy your life! .................keep on moving.keep on writing ..some day it will pay...bneautiful write....10 read mine not easy...open page... beauty

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Obinna Eruchie 13 September 2009

A befitting piece for dedication.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 17 May 2009

Thank you for your kindness to dedicate this poem to me. Only you are a blessed one to write such powerful poems. May God bless you with all the fortunes you richly deserve for your sincere and kind heart.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

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Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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