A Humble Suggestion Poem by Mohammad Akmal Nazir

A Humble Suggestion

Rating: 4.7


Nature supports us for we support Nature,
She will ruin us if we resort to ruin her
For She is the part of that immament power
Which controls the universe.
So let's not reverse the wheel of Nature
And thus make the world a better place to live.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 20 March 2011

it is nature when Nature respond to Us because we also a part of nature...so when we decide to call disaster so nature will morph into monster...dont blame on Nature of nature because we are the part nature who makes this is it right Akmal? ? _Unwritten Soul

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Malaya Roses 20 March 2011

I have to agree with your suggestion and I understand well about the nature. If we keep hurting the nature, at on point, she will stoke back with ultimate force and the damage is beyond our imagination. We have to keep our mother-earth well so we could survive her anger. Well done.

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Seema Chowdhury 24 March 2011

sure well said. wish we could all realize that. in Canada day after tomorrow we are celebrating Earth Day. hope we can all conserve energy, water etc.and make it a safe place to live.

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Rekha Mandagere 31 March 2011

Beautiful poem! This valuable suggestion should be followed by all to save life!

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Jenny Gordon 01 April 2011

Nah, come, come. You profess to believe in God. He alone rules. He rules mankind as well as the entire creation; man owes it to the Lord alone to wisely steward His creation, as He gave man to steward it. The evil that befalls us in the natural world may well be a result of our destructive actions, but not necessarily, I think.

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Marx Lenn Mendoza 04 December 2012

two thumbs up...deserved to get 10...nice one! ! ! !

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Hans Vr 26 June 2011

Very well said, totally agree with the message

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Stan Petrovich 22 June 2011

Wholeheartedly I am in agreement. A so simply stated truth! Thanks, Akmal

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Micmac Mccrory 13 May 2011

Beautiful sentiment.

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Callum Leckie 07 May 2011

A true and fine poem.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Bahraich, U.P. India
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