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A Letter From The Soul To The Mind

Rating: 4.7

A day later and I’m still here,
I’m sorry that I didn’t disappear
as you wanted me to,
I’m sorry that I’ll be the reason
for your suffering in the future,
I’m sorry that I can’t leave you alone,
like everyone else.
But you and me are one..

Love: Your Soul

William Mae 16 March 2005

Penned perfectly, we are one with our soul, like it or not. a great write.

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Seán O' Muiriosa 28 February 2005

I'm a big fan of your poetry, Ivy. Once again you have produced a wonderfully powerful poem. Please keep writing. Its a pleasure to read it. Best Wishes, John Morrissey

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dissatified exmember 22 February 2005

Ivy, for someone who has only recently started speaking in English you did darn well. I'd hate to try and do a poem in Greek and make it so beautiful. WELL DONE Hugs Jan

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Kelly Allen Vinal 22 February 2005

Personal and ubiquitous in meaning. Very nice, Ivy.

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Christine Magee 22 February 2005

This speaks volumes. Lovely work. Chrissie

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Gina Onyemaechi 17 March 2006

Maybe one day mind and soul will be reconciled. Gina.

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Esther Leclerc 21 February 2006

I like this a lot, Ivy. The mind and the soul are so often in conflict; this is true for me... 'A day later and I'm still here'. Probably not, but this sounds a bit like a suicide survivor, for what is suicide but an attempt to kill both (even more than the body) ? Thank you for this.

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Lori Boulard 12 October 2005

ah, so true and so well captured! If only the soul cared about the mind; then again, we probably wouldn't have poetry...

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Thomas Viruvelil 19 September 2005

Real great poetic imagination.when in thick love you may feel that the lover and you are soul and mind, inseperable

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Gina PrettyBrownEyes 30 June 2005

thanks for commenting on my poem. i love your writing style, cant wait to read more

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