A Lonely Girl Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

A Lonely Girl

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a lonely girl was lost
at night under the moonlit
on the stranded thought;

with the breeze,
the lonely girl
played a whispering

a flute lured her
none listened to it
under the starry sight

crowded nature
smiled on her wandering
hitherto thither

beneath the cloudy shadow
she mowed the desire of
back to love

nothing and none was there
but the girl with a suave heart
was walking with moonlit
for a dreamy prince



-April 11,2019 Chattogram

Thursday, April 11, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: girl,lost,love,waiting
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
from my comment on "A Girl Was Missing Guy One Day" poem by Veronika Bitkina(4/11/2019 5: 45: 00 AM)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 11 April 2019

WOW nothing and none was there but the girl with a suave heart WOW WHY DID U NOT JUMP at the opportunity seldom it comes or is repeated An opportunity comes but once only DEAR MB of BD

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Dr Antony Theodore 11 April 2019

nothing and none was there but the girl with a suave heart was walking with moonlit for a dreamy prince - - desire, love yearning for love. all expressed so wonderfully well in this poem dear Mahtabji. thank u. tony

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Jennifer Birchall 17 April 2019

Beautiful poetic expression dear Mahtab.

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 April 2019

Love! ! ! ! Waiting. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 23 September 2019

every one jacked u her suave heart love and words apart mb of bd goodest selection SUAVE AS IN SLAVE could be

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 23 September 2019

she mowed the desire of back to love mowed did you mean sowed mb of bd

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Indira Renganathan 01 August 2019

Nice depiction of a suave heart....indeed a good poem...thank you

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Akhtar Jawad 26 April 2019

nothing and none was there but the girl with a suave heart was walking with moonlit for a dreamy prince Nice lines of a beautiful poem.

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Jankovic Zoran 20 April 2019

Everything that's under the cloak of love is nice.

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