A Letter To God Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

A Letter To God

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Dear God
Who I am You know better
Mahtab Bangalee is nothing else just a name
on this earth, a little human residential planet, I live in the bay of Bangle

Dear God
wherever I go whenever
find nothing without natural existence

someone said You are shapeless almighty existence
shaped everyone and everything is Your reflection, under Your controlling
and separated You are from these everyone and everything
You have no synonym on this earth

someone said You are shapeless almighty existence, yes right, but
You are existed in shaped everyone and everything
or shaped everyone and everything is living agents in Your imperceptible existence
existed shaped all are Your pure synonym

and someone said You are nothing, just a mere word in fearful mind,
cowards care, bear up You in their beliefs (lazy brain or confirmation biased thought)

Dear God
of these, I know nothing
intuitions make me an unruly thinker
sometimes excessive emotionalism, sentimentalism, extravagance thinking, eccentricity makes me enervated
debilitated believer I'm defeated everywhere

Dear God
I confess I'm guilty, a knave
I bow whole my body, every limb to You
I confess I don't believe the prophecy, Your revelations, Your prevailed orders, commands
I confess I'm a skeptic of all holy religion books
but without seeing You I cannot acknowledge Your shapelessness sovereignty
my intuitions provide me if You created all why You need to destroy one by another
if You created all to help each other why You need to be worshiped from created bar

Dear God
I confess I'm blameworthy hellish
bury me lively, bury my egoistic intuitions, the arrogance of time and timeless
bury my wayward conscience, strayed commonsense
bury the spirit which taught me to think only I'm the best pious, closest to You

Dear God
penalize me in the judgment cage of iron maiden burning thorns
punish me when I belittle Your other creations
punish me when I pray You to damn into hell the others who do not follow or believe what I follow or believe

Dear God
penalize me on the scaffold of magma maiden burning noose
when I doubt Your true revelation of love for all,
penalize me when I make inferential correct constitutions or theology for Your whole creations by intuitions grammar

Dear God
punish me by guillotine under Your high voltage sunlight
when the knowledge of my theology makes me blind follower
and forgetting humane conscience, sympathy when I make me busy to go to heaven hasty

Dear God
I know, for me You have no forgiveness, mercy
this also I know, Your ultimate punishment will be forgiveness as the merciful almighty
though I have heard You hate those who belie You, hate You
but I love Your all creations as well as You equally
if my love and there You are true please forgive me


-December 02,2019 Chattogram

Monday, December 2, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: prayer,self discovery
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 02 December 2019

that Truth or God stays for ever concealed then it is still more clear that He can not be seen but can be only felt..God is confusing us all..only way to reach Him is Faith and Faith alone.. so no need to go for a punishment...staunch prayer and surrender is enough..a thought provoking poem with nice choice of words and expression...thank you dear friend for your valuable comment on my poem

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Mahtab Bangalee 02 December 2019

Thanks a lot dear Ma'm (Reverend Poetess) for your excellent explanatory comments

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 05 December 2019

WHICH GOD HAS SO MUCH TIME TO READ SUCH LENGTHY POETRY 7.5 BILLIONS HAS HE GOD NEVER APPEARS WHEN ONE IS ALIVE WHEN YOU ARE FAR IN THE SKY YOU GIVE UP YOUR SEARCH POETESS HAVE FAITH IN YOURSELF DO YOUR BEST ON MOMMY EARTH

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Yoonoos Peerbocus 02 December 2019

very meaningful all through

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 December 2019

A valuable piece of work! Admired your earnest prayer..................................10++++++++

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Saravanan Sivasubramanian 11 December 2019

Dear poet, very nice poem. A good conversation with god in you and everywhere. If all creatures in earth is reflection of god then I have a prayer to god. oh god please destroy the discrimination among us.

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Akhtar Jawad 06 December 2019

A letter written on behalf of all of us, thanks dear.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 05 December 2019

WHICH GOD HAS SO MUCH TIME TO READ SUCH LENGTHY POETRY 7.5 BILLIONS HAS HE AND I HAVE ONLY TWO TO HOLD MY SHOULDERS AR AND MB OF BD ASK AR DID HE REALLY READ FULLY MUST BE HAVING TIME A PLENTY ASK PH ALSO

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Aniruddha Pathak 03 December 2019

A prayer and pursuit of God is nothing but self discovery, well said, dear MB

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Kostas Lagos 02 December 2019

Earthshaking! To my list

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