A Love (La Isla Flamenco) Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

A Love (La Isla Flamenco)

Rating: 4.8


(dedicated to Ms. Chitra Lele, a poet friend at poemhunter)

I have been thinking
All night long
Now I am exhausted
What are you, Love? , I whisper

But there is only the mango tree
Rustling in a dream
The heart is very sublime
Very subtle and calm

On your diary book
The moonlight shines in
On your smiles and laughs
Just circle around

But you are not there
Then I am wandering
I am searching
Where are you, Love?

I go about exploring
O wondrous sweet and fair!
Then I touch you
Standing under a silvery canopy

With a basket of lilies on your arm
A bouquet of hope in your heart
You are kind, like bird
And you talk to me

I hear the Cleveland Orchestra
Playing gorgeous tunes
You tell me that
Sunflowers need spraying

That the rhinos
Have overrun all wounds
That the blue roses
Should be cut back and rounded

You say to me these things
O, beauty from the light heat!
Wait, wonderful Love!
And shuns to have her graces spied

But I feel you, heart of virgin
Innocent heart-grow of polished pure
Flowing gracefully beneath
The green steeples of the Nomad land

And I long to kneel instantly at your wish
While all about us voice tenderly
Sweet Ode Songs of Henry Purcell’s
O Love, where are you guiding me to?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seema Aarella 14 February 2009

A good poem...very expressive and emotive! ! ! !

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Rajaram Ramachandran 14 February 2009

A more good love song

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Chitra - 14 February 2009

well expressed.. Excellent work

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Ben Gieske 16 December 2008

I like the first part very much until “I hear the Cleveland Orchestra”. I get sort of tangled up in what you were saying and what you are saying after this.

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Soffi Bawahab 05 November 2008

It touch my heart. It's a very lovely poem. I do still believe in love..

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Surayya Abbas 06 June 2009

Lovely poem. Well written.Nice to read.

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rago rago 18 February 2009

i enjoyed reading of urs....... great piece.....well narrated poem......feel good that u are dedicated this to ur friend

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Catrina Heart 16 February 2009

Brilliance in composition for our fellow writers...Ms. Chitra Lele one of the greatest and pioneer poets here i guess in PH...10+++

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Seema Chowdhury 14 February 2009

very nice poem.thanks for sharing.

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Ency Bearis 14 February 2009

a good poem..well narrated...a great piece

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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