Close your eyes and gently walk
Down dreamy Memory Lane.
Now stoop to pick and smell the flowers.
Choose just short stays - or stay for hours!
You're happy once again.
You're YOU.
Feel release right through your frame.
Your heart begins to breathe.
With stress gone, grasp this slower pace,
Relax - you're in a different place
And never want to leave.
You're a new YOU.
Examine what you feel right now.
What words spring to your mind?
Lightness? Freedom? Relief and Bliss?
Remember these so you'll not miss
The rescue you will find.
You're a relaxed, new YOU.
Envision your new rescued heart
Which nothing can invade.
This place to go when things are hard
Will transform you, when once you start
To value what you've made.
You're a relaxed and happy new YOU.
A poem explaining a transformed label ' A New You ' with neoteric logos after a change. You have eloborated the post shift patterns very woderfully with a preview of calmness, liberty, self-determination and ecstasy.It seems to have shifted the behaviourly trends and wanting the concerned one to recognize the new settings.....10/10 Best Wishes Sameer
Envision your new rescued heart Which nothing can invade. This place to go when things are hard Will transform you, when once you start To value what you've made. This is the part i like most and can relate to Every body wish for a place to go to when thing are hard n the place where everyone seek sanctuary is different and the place where u go when things are hard is the place where u can be u n no one will say anything bad bout u. I think what i want to say is if there is a sanctuary for me it will be like tis, fore nothings can hurt me.
hey ya there Faye! have a lot of pieces missed from you ehhhh? Thumbs up for the unfading Faye Slimm!
A very excellent poem for its message that is easy to pick up-- having a partner who is a yoga teacher its liken to a yoga lesson in words for the last line says it all in meditation 'Your a relaxed and happy new you', regards uavniceday' Thankyou for your kind comments
Really enjoyed your poem and gave me food for thought. Thank you.
A lovely poem Fay, puts you in a good mood to start the day.
This poem started relieving me of stress within moments of reading the first few lines! ! ! ! ! This poem shoulkd be bottled! ! ! ! ! !
New York, not ole York.. A walled city versus an open space.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This poem is beautifully put together, awesome visuals and ever so relaxing, I only found I wanted so much more of it.A scene of tranquility. Beautiful a10