# # A Poem - Senryu Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# # A Poem - Senryu

Rating: 5.0


a package of words
wrapped around a thought in it
disappears when read

[words disappear thought lingers]

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Smiley Hooker 28 June 2009

Your package of words is always full of sensible thoughts, Sam. Short, simple and brilliant! : -)

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Rajaram Ramachandran 27 June 2009

Any noteworthy good package of words, wrapped around a thought in it, remain in one's heart when read, what I feel.

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Louis Rams 27 June 2009

very good for a three liner.

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nicely put. i like it.

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Ency Bearis 27 June 2009

such a package deal of words...some are kept some are forgotten...meaningful write....10

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rago rago 10 July 2009

cute brief and meaning lingers ever..........

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Eyan Desir 30 June 2009

they bring pleasure to our heart to Mister Sam

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Indira Renganathan 29 June 2009

words disappear thought lingers....sometimes a good wording also lingers....inelligent craft

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Joseph Poewhit 29 June 2009

A precise thought of wisdom

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Extremely philosophical Samanyan and great writing as usual! 10 Karin Anderson

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