One red rose stays blushing in my garden
I caught a glimpse of it in the early dawn
On the carpet of green, as a lovely dame it does sway
Flashing hues of contrast on a dull monsoon day
A flower with petals of such delicate contours
Yet sheltered by sharp stinging thorns that pierce
Rain drops dripping off its soft ruddy face
As blood rushing from a wound's open surface
Fairer far than anything, one can envision
Its petals, woven and spun by angels of heaven
Oh symbol of grace, you rock me in delight,
And in me a thousand poetic fancies ignite!
Its petals, woven and spun by angels of heaven Oh symbol of grace, you rock me in delight.... //.... Wow! A great treat for all nature-lovers. What a beautiful portrayal of rose which stands 'Fairer far than anything' else. The poem goes into MyPoemList. Thanks, Valsa ji.
The glimpse of early beauty you have interestingly captured with much benevolent care and affection. Raindrops dripping on its petals sing a nice song. We hear the true sound of raining and dance of petals we see and feel. A magnetic and magnificent poem is excellently penned...5 stars.
Good ode to a lovely rose. With your poem my spirit rose
Fairer far than anything, one can envision Its petals, woven and spun by angels of heaven Oh symbol of grace, you rock me in delight, And in me a thousand poetic fancies ignite! /// excellent poetic expression about the rain washed red rose; your red rose as if read your heartiest expression; it's very beautiful; just WOW for this
Valsa, I particularly relate to the last line. And how color, in gray light, seems more intense! -Glen
A transcendental work, Valsa. If there is any flower that seems to dance, to find joy, to revel in a hard rain, it is the rose. I look in my own garden and see much of it groaning after a terrific rainfall. The roses are bobbing up and down, giving thanks for the refreshment. A great work!
'Oh symbol of grace, you rock me in delight, And in me a thousand poetic fancies ignite! ' - So does it, to your readers! The picture and the poem, No doubt, a poetic gem! The poem, so well written, deserves full marks and I gladly give it: 5 Stars *****! I recommend this poem to be selected as the 'Member Poem of the Day' for any day soon.
Wow what a rosy imaginative beautiful poem that delighted my poetic flower lover heart! ! Kudos for this masterpiece quality poem. Plz pleez do read my newest poem titled, " babies cry anywhere"
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A beautiful poem on red rose. A poet can't help writing a poem looking a rose with its petals sprinkled with dew drops or rain drops rolling on its soft petals. 'Oh symbol of grace, you rock me in delight, And in me a thousand poetic fancies ignite! , .... is so beautiful. Great poem.