A Special Gift Called Life Poem by Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie

A Special Gift Called Life

Rating: 5.0


Life is a special gift,
Something you must be swift
To take care as you shift
Your focus to uplift
Your essence with the will,
You possess so and till
That joy may come to fill
It with bliss that does thrill.
Do so that life be fit
And be heavenly lit,
For with that kind to hit
To put sunlight in it.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kuji Soliman 07 September 2009

very very very very nice :) i loved it and i showed it to my friends too :)

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Will Barber 14 August 2009

Wonderful rhyme shift, and an inspiring message.

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Do so that life be fit And be heavenly lit, For with that kind to hit To put sunlight in it. o, lord gift us it with joy and happiness....10 read mine o, lord, , , prayer...prayer for friend...music band

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Broken Heart 17 July 2009

nyc poem! ! nycly writen! 10 again! ! : D

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Raj Nandy 15 July 2009

LIFE INDEED IS A GIFT! YET PEOPLE TAKE IT FOR GRANTED! ONCE WE REALISE THIS, THEN OUR FOCUS WOULD ALSO CHANGE! 10! -Raj Nandy

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Eyan Desir 17 November 2009

Well expressed.......................

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Bushra Hussaini 07 November 2009

simple, short but very creative! ! !

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 02 October 2009

I voted +10 for this poem!

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Tamara Hanaring A Thought Mate 24 September 2009

a beauiful wise poem..so well penned

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 16 September 2009

Lovely and expressive. Keep writing!

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