A Taste Of Heaven … 1103-2k16 Poem by saadat tahir

A Taste Of Heaven … 1103-2k16

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Never a space may foster gloom
Nor a shred of fear or doom

If its doors stay firmly shut
Bondage twines too, keenly cut

Keep out worry, consuming loathe
With love and care if you clothe

Mundane things, simple words
Fly and flit like twittering birds

Swap the lonely sorrow today
Adorn with hope, your every day

Then! our lives may take a turn
To let some incense candle burn

Poems erupt from eyes and lips
A taste of heaven our being sips

Friday, March 11, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
saadat tahir
11, March-2k16
Leonard Dabydeen 11 March 2016

Beautiful flowing couplets with an esoteric touch in a metaphysical stream. Lovely write.

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Nosheen Irfan 23 March 2016

Lovely imagery throughout the poem to create a heavenly picture of life. Enjoyed reading thoroughly.

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 June 2016

Keep out worry! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Leeann Azzopardi 02 June 2019

if only that simple. Please check out my poems

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Daniel Brick 13 March 2017

This is the difficult road of love, which we travel because we sense there is mutual joy at the end of it. Bu the early stages are frustrating. But that amorous effort is more compensated by success. Your closing lines are absolutely beautiful in evoking the wionder of love achieved in mutual happiness - POEMS ERUPT FROM EYES AND LIPS / A TASTE OF HEAVEN PUR BRING SIPS.

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Jaya Das 04 February 2017

Mundane things, simple words Fly and flit like twittering birds beautiful poem n ya mundane things have something unusual always... thank you

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Saadat Tahir 04 February 2017

thanx jaya...nice words... :)

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Muhammad Ali 17 January 2017

very clear messages in this beautiful poem. every line is lovely

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Saadat Tahir 04 February 2017

thanx dear poet am honored...

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Asia Villaflor 28 December 2016

you can clearly say what you realy wanted us to understand in a few words, directly, clever and its rhythm is awesome.

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