Addiction Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Addiction

Rating: ★5.0


Addiction is like a quicksand
That pulls you down
To the deepest and darkest bottom.


Copyright 2020, Rose Marie Juan- Austin, All Rights Reserved

Sunday, December 20, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: addiction,poem,rights,rose
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 06 January 2021

Yes you picked up right...it just pulls you down into dark dungeon. Beautiful description.

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Susan Williams 06 January 2021

As this poem proves, brevity can be ultra powerful in getting the point across!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 January 2021

That's true! Addiction to poetry is tatally different from any other kind of addictions. I feel your addicted to poetry... nothing wrong in that. Carry on....5 stars

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Bernard F. Asuncion 26 December 2020

A well executed poem. Truly marvelous.5 stars*****

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Anjandev Roy 21 December 2020

To the deepest and darkest bottom........excellent write.....thank u.....anjandev roy.

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Tamara Beryl Latham 25 September 2026

You've stated so much in so few words, but they have an enormous impact on the reader because they present the reality of truth. Thanks for sharing. Loved it.5 stars.

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Rob Lamberton 21 April 2026

"Addiction is like a quicksand"

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Chinedu Dike 21 November 2024

The downward spiral that follows drug abuse is aptly portrayed in the haiku. A concise and brilliant work of art.

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Nabakishore Dash 10 July 2023

What a similar of quick sand! !

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Anjandev Roy 21 July 2022

Brilliant piece indeed.....thank u, dear poetess.....

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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