Almost Famous. Poem by JOSE MURGUIA

Almost Famous.

Rating: 4.7


so close but yet so far,
so bright but not yet a star,
almost famous,
but still nameless.
aldo i know some day
you will know what my name is.


01/11/2008
Copyright ©2009 Jose Murguia

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eldon M Thomas 03 February 2009

I'm digging your style dude! I don't meet that many fellow rhyming poets. The majority of poets I interact with are spoken word artists whose poems are mostly prose and I am left feeling out of place. But they are still good. I like your style. Keep it up.

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Junior Pocoloco 31 January 2009

So bright but not yet a star. Inner brightness is what a star wishes it could have and you got it.

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C. P. Sharma 15 January 2009

You write with gusto, you are already a poet ro recon with, live life with pride and cast off pessimism in life. My good wishes are with you. CP

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Eddie Roa 15 January 2009

My hopes are with you. Keep on honing your writing skills and become a famous poet soon.

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Gargi Saha 14 January 2009

A wonderful poem....................

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Ben Gieske 28 September 2009

Nicely done. I often wonder about those who are waiting in the wings, only one step away from stardom which for so many never comes. They are left waiting in the wings.

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Rishav Rastogi 18 August 2009

Yes Sir......definitely one day she is going to know that... 10

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lisa moore 11 August 2009

so short yet it is such a good poem! ! bravo! ! ! luv lisa xo : -)

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<font color =fusha>Amy 09 March 2009

short and simple great poem

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Sumpter Carter 18 February 2009

I must agree with Eldon Thomas, most poets I know are free verse, which is an art in its self, but I prefer rhyme. I'm not sure if 'aldo' is a name or a misspelling of all though, but it is very nice. It's got a raw sort of feeling to it.

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