I must agree with Eldon Thomas, most poets I know are free verse, which is an art in its self, but I prefer rhyme. I'm not sure if 'aldo' is a name or a misspelling of all though, but it is very nice. It's got a raw sort of feeling to it.
I'm digging your style dude! I don't meet that many fellow rhyming poets. The majority of poets I interact with are spoken word artists whose poems are mostly prose and I am left feeling out of place. But they are still good. I like your style. Keep it up.