so close but yet so far,
so bright but not yet a star,
almost famous,
but still nameless.
aldo i know some day
you will know what my name is.
01/11/2008
Copyright ©2009 Jose Murguia
So bright but not yet a star. Inner brightness is what a star wishes it could have and you got it.
You write with gusto, you are already a poet ro recon with, live life with pride and cast off pessimism in life. My good wishes are with you. CP
My hopes are with you. Keep on honing your writing skills and become a famous poet soon.
Nicely done. I often wonder about those who are waiting in the wings, only one step away from stardom which for so many never comes. They are left waiting in the wings.
Yes Sir......definitely one day she is going to know that... 10
so short yet it is such a good poem! ! bravo! ! ! luv lisa xo : -)
I must agree with Eldon Thomas, most poets I know are free verse, which is an art in its self, but I prefer rhyme. I'm not sure if 'aldo' is a name or a misspelling of all though, but it is very nice. It's got a raw sort of feeling to it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I'm digging your style dude! I don't meet that many fellow rhyming poets. The majority of poets I interact with are spoken word artists whose poems are mostly prose and I am left feeling out of place. But they are still good. I like your style. Keep it up.