I lost my pen, love
it ran out of ink.
all I have left
is a pencil with
a chewed off
eraser...
and the task
of writing
about you
with no mistakes.
Solid words on a short leash. This poem is full of confidence. I love it. Thank you.
I really like this one. Finding the right words does often feel impossible. How to capture somebody that means so much on paper?
Oooohhhhh! that's a dodgy situation there Eila, I think breadcrumbs are supposed to work quite well as an eraser, though I've never tried it. Clever write indeed. Love Ernestine XXX
Lovely! No longer than it needed to be. Every word counts. Great job!
how charming and lovely. One of the best non rhyming poems I have read in awhile. So simple and sweet.
A short yet brilliant poem.. The use of the pencil with 'chewed' eraser is beautiful...
Lovely poem, simple but a beauty that is capable to touch a reader
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Simple and powerful poem....on Life, on relationship and on everything it fits perfectly.