Corey Threet

Answer Me (C) 12-19-09

Even though I love you there’s something I can’t contain
This feeling of utter disappointment and of some undying pain
It doesn’t seem to go away no matter how hard I think it’s not
Because in this web of love it kinda seems like I’m caught
Now don’t get me wrong I believe we still can be together
But the spark is kind of dying like the eye of stormy weather
I know there's some steps necessary before we can express affection
Because my thinking of our possible future seems to be my only protection
I don’t know the reasons oral words just doesn’t seem to read right
I guess the only way to let you hear how I feel is ironically to write
I wanna kiss you and I miss you but maybe us can never be
And only due to haters filling my mind with some fermented ki
Maybe I’m just tripping or constantly movin like a dancer
I really hope we can be together so now I really need an answer.

*Virus 12 - Shy*

Copyright 12/19/08 ©® Corey Threet
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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 19, 2008
Poem Edited: Friday, December 11, 2009

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Comments about Answer Me (C) 12-19-09 by Corey Threet

  • Amrit Rathi (6/5/2010 12:49:00 AM)

    Very clear expression of your tender sentiments, and boldly so, beautifully portrayed! I loved your poem, you have a great potential! And let me tell you Love is not dependence as often lover say, ' I can't love without him/her'. This is incorrect. Love is a conscious choice of independent(and not dependent- slaves) two individual to live together and enjoy the independence.Thanks.

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  • Katherine Wheatley (5/6/2010 1:34:00 PM)

    Beautiful babe! : ~) almost had mii cryin! x

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  • Adrian Cordova (4/16/2010 7:51:00 PM)

    Your analogies are great! And the emotion of dying love is really captured here

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  • J. R. (4/9/2010 3:32:00 PM)

    Wow! This really evokes feelings of a love slipping a way while all one can do is helplessly watch.

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  • Rachel Anderson (3/21/2010 11:45:00 AM)

    wow great poem, i can see the emotion. well done

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  • Ben Gieske (10/2/2009 4:29:00 PM)

    You are developing you own style. This one reads smoothly and presents your case in a noteworthy way. You are good at rhyming and coming up with something worthwhile to say.

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  • Alexis Bass (9/25/2009 8:06:00 PM)

    This poem is beautiful i can feel the emotion in it. your a really good writer i love how you show emotions so easily with your writing its effortless it seems. :)

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  • *_sakura ~daisy_* (9/25/2009 5:10:00 PM)

    my favorite lines....'I know there's some steps necessary before we can express affection
    Because my thinking of our possible future seems to be my only protection
    I don’t know the reasons oral words just doesn’t seem to read right
    I guess the only way to let you hear how I feel is ironically to write
    I wanna kiss
    you and I miss you but maybe us can never be'

    i dont want to be like everyone and just say these are my favorite lines but....this truly is a loving poem. I really feel the emotions of love and pain and so much more
    personally you displayed love and pursuing a love one and not lettling go in a good way putting yourself out there....truly i respect this

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  • Mubeen SadhikaMubeen Sadhika (9/18/2009 7:50:00 AM)

    Maybe I’m just tripping or constantly movin like a dancer
    I really hope we can be together so now I really need an answer.

    Really beautiful expression. Nicely penned. Deserves 10+++++

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  • Chatara Conway (9/6/2009 5:47:00 PM)

    I know there's some steps necessary before we can express affection
    Because my thinking of our possible future seems to be my only protection
    I don’t know the reasons oral words just doesn’t seem to read right
    I guess the only way to let you hear how I feel is ironically to write

    These lines are... amazing.
    I love them so much.
    Plus beautiful poem.

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  • Danny H (7/31/2009 1:27:00 AM)

    Even though I love you there’s something I can’t contain
    This feeling of utter disappointment and of some undying pain

    These lines really spoke your pain and 'utter disappointment'
    Very well crafted, I Loved it.

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  • Claude H Oliver Ii (6/11/2009 12:24:00 AM)

    Sorry for not responding sooner. I liked the simile of the dying spark and the eye of the storm. An
    eternal question which every generation must find its own way to ask and answer.

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  • Ravi ARavi A (5/15/2009 1:16:00 PM)

    Well. You are asking a question through this poem. Will the answer be another poem?

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  • Liz Williams (5/15/2009 7:39:00 AM)

    I think that's really sweet.

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  • Hailey Agnew (4/29/2009 6:13:00 PM)

    AWWWW
    that's so adorable...
    i know exactly how you feel, so i really love this poem.
    don't worry, a guy like you shouldn't have a problem getting a girl... maybe you should show her the poem. girls are a sucker for sweet poems...

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  • Melissa Villafuerte (4/29/2009 11:46:00 AM)

    I like this poem.. It is so sweeat.

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  • Willow Herber (4/17/2009 2:21:00 PM)

    This is like sooo SWEET`
    however ur writing bout is obvioulsy missing out on sum1 great!

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  • djean Whitney (4/16/2009 2:45:00 PM)

    This is amazingly sweet! :) She is missing out on a grat guy.

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  • Paige S (4/13/2009 1:59:00 PM)

    This is a wonderful 'from-the-heart' poem. Keep up the good work!

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  • Pocky Varela (4/10/2009 5:09:00 PM)

    Dude i know this kinda feeling all too well: (...

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