Unwritten Soul

Anywhere With You - Poem by Unwritten Soul

Sense the beauty
In a garden of immortality
Guarding our eternal memory
Stay bloom in flowers perfume
For I am not hiding it from you
Even not in a pinch of seconds
Love of mine, always be yours
Maybe I keep it somewhere
But don't ask me where
Nowhere else but in you
If you just find mine
Underneath your heart
Find, you will find
Somewhere inside
Where our smiles alive
Indestructible in times
Growing old remain young
A sense of beauty i have
A treasure i buried in you
Nowhere else but in you
So please keep mine cared
Even my lips say goodbye
My heart and soul wont be
Someday I may die
Among the dust i will lay
Forever the love alive, it will
Never fade, your love i feel still
As true loves lasting in time
For you i hide in your heart
Not anymore secret of me
Ages of body till soul only
Guarded to be eternally
In a beautiful soul garden
A garden of immortality

Poet's Notes about The Poem

This piece of poetry initially intended for a collaboration work, but then as idea explodes into new direction and doesnt fit with the collaboration work, the original one was scrapped off and put it away and reformed it into a new poem with new lines added. Dont want to waste the poem i have written, i shared now for all my valued readers_Soul, Unwritten Soul

Comments about Anywhere With You by Unwritten Soul

  • (4/11/2018 1:01:00 PM)

    So warmly portrayed- -with great heart and true charm.
    An amazing read!
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  • (6/17/2017 12:03:00 AM)

    This is a sensational poem, Soul. I am transported back in time reading this, and can relive some fond memories. What triggered the sensation was the element of contrast, contradiction. You remind me there is youth and escape with age. There is immortality in the garden, a place of constant renewal. There is vulnerability and an exposition of truth in secrecy...This work is a wonderful gateway to nostalgia. Great work, Soul. (Report) Reply

    Unwritten Soul (6/17/2017 7:51:00 AM)

    Merci, merci...the idea of this poem is like passing the most tresured thing to someone, to keep it alive although we are no more there...i believe as we pass this feeling to who we care, they may feel the same as we feel...i dont know how it can relates to your nostalgia, but when i write it it just hit my mind (luckily it wasnt stone..just idea and feeling) ...the good thing about growing up and going old is we have many great things and moment...without following time, we will never experience this...yes some sour there but great ones are abundant too...worth to grow old i guess...like we discussed before, it just aging body not our soul/heart.

  • Edward Kofi Louis (12/26/2016 5:10:00 AM)

    Ages of body
    I still feel your love. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

  • Christopher Tye (9/16/2016 6:58:00 AM)

    Wonderful poem, true love will always transcend any obstacle. (Report) Reply

  • (8/29/2014 8:24:00 PM)

    ............dear soul, this is a fabulous poem with all the key ingredients of a masterpiece.....a flower with the sweet fragrance of perfume.....the beautiful soul garden of immortality....and a treasure of forever love to cherish always...loved reading this one....read it a few times.... (Report) Reply

  • Sina Farajzadeh (8/13/2013 9:48:00 AM)

    Hi. What's in immortality? I guess it would be boring to be immortal... Have you heard about the myth of Sibyl of Cumae?
    I saw with my own eyes the Sibyl at Cumae hanging in a cage, and when the boys said to her 'Sibyl, what do you want? ' that one replied 'I want to die'.

    If I were John Donne I would say you and your beloved should say goodbye to earthly love and then start a heavenly love in order to have an immortal love. But I am not Donne! hehe. Anyway people live with their beliefs. And they differ. No problem with it. Good Luck.
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  • Patricia Grantham (7/30/2013 6:55:00 AM)

    Love thats immortal that lasts and lasts and lasts. Is found anywhere and
    everywhere. We may be apart but love will always remain in our heart. I invite
    you to read my poem More Than You'll Ever Know. A very inspiring write.
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  • Geetha Jayakumar (7/21/2013 12:12:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem...Enjoyed reading from begining till end. Good flow. (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (7/4/2013 4:40:00 PM)

    a lovely write. excellent. I enjoyed the read (Report) Reply

  • Farah Ilyas (4/8/2013 12:57:00 PM)

    Eternal searching is really a great task but this poem shows that your soul is indeeed unwritten, nice poem (Report) Reply

  • (4/4/2013 8:02:00 AM)

    A work of art grandly created by an even grander soul!
    It is so easy to like what you choose to show the reader.
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  • Valsa George (2/21/2013 2:29:00 AM)

    Very evocative in tone and timbre! A poem rich in ease and flow! ! (Report) Reply

  • Poetheart Morgan (2/17/2013 2:43:00 PM)

    ZEN ZEN ZEN! ! ! ! Our eternal search! (Report) Reply

  • (2/17/2013 9:23:00 AM)

    The beautiful love exposed in this creditable poem of yours is really riveting! ! Thanks for not wasting the wonderful poem and sharing it with us.! (Report) Reply

  • Diane Hine (2/17/2013 5:41:00 AM)

    'a treasure I buried in you, bowhere else but in you' - a touching thought in a lovely poem. (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (2/14/2013 11:47:00 AM)

    Beautiful Soul, very romantic and heartwarming. (Report) Reply

  • (2/13/2013 8:48:00 PM)

    Beautiful...beautiful....i am enjoying it now in the tropical island of Mauritius. Again a big 10. (Report) Reply

  • Nader Baheri (2/12/2013 4:14:00 AM)

    fascinating soul.
    the garden of immortality.gaurdening the eternity.
    some thing penetrated to my mind while i was reading this poem.you know what:
    if we plant just a tree for every one we love we will have the green plant with fresh air.and those trees would be the signs of our loves and if some day we die they are going to continue their lives after us.and this would be the eternity.
    i have to confess although i had read some part of it before but it still for me new and fresh
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  • Poetheart Morgan (2/11/2013 5:46:00 PM)

    Oh! Helo romantic Poet! That is the way to break a heart! Beautiful tune to lovers one. (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (2/11/2013 10:19:00 AM)

    Aha! So romantic you are here Soul! Very musical. Loved as I always do. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 11, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, February 14, 2013

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