Sense the beauty
In a garden of immortality
Guarding our eternal memory
Stay bloom in flowers perfume
For I am not hiding it from you
Even not in a pinch of seconds
Love of mine, always be yours
Maybe I keep it somewhere
But don't ask me where
Nowhere else but in you
If you just find mine
Underneath your heart
Find, you will find
Somewhere inside
Where our smiles alive
Indestructible in times
Growing old remain young
A sense of beauty i have
A treasure i buried in you
Nowhere else but in you
So please keep mine cared
Even my lips say goodbye
My heart and soul wont be
Someday I may die
Among the dust i will lay
Forever the love alive, it will
Never fade, your love i feel still
As true loves lasting in time
For you i hide in your heart
Not anymore secret of me
Ages of body till soul only
Guarded to be eternally
In a beautiful soul garden
A garden of immortality
A beautiful poem...Enjoyed reading from begining till end. Good flow.
Love thats immortal that lasts and lasts and lasts. Is found anywhere and everywhere. We may be apart but love will always remain in our heart. I invite you to read my poem More Than You'll Ever Know. A very inspiring write.
Aha! So romantic you are here Soul! Very musical. Loved as I always do.
This is a sensational poem, Soul. I am transported back in time reading this, and can relive some fond memories. What triggered the sensation was the element of contrast, contradiction. You remind me there is youth and escape with age. There is immortality in the garden, a place of constant renewal. There is vulnerability and an exposition of truth in secrecy...This work is a wonderful gateway to nostalgia. Great work, Soul.
Merci, merci...the idea of this poem is like passing the most tresured thing to someone, to keep it alive although we are no more there...i believe as we pass this feeling to who we care, they may feel the same as we feel...i dont know how it can relates to your nostalgia, but when i write it it just hit my mind (luckily it wasnt stone..just idea and feeling) ...the good thing about growing up and going old is we have many great things and moment...without following time, we will never experience this...yes some sour there but great ones are abundant too...worth to grow old i guess...like we discussed before, it just aging body not our soul/heart.
I still feel your love. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Wonderful poem, true love will always transcend any obstacle.
............dear soul, this is a fabulous poem with all the key ingredients of a masterpiece.....a flower with the sweet fragrance of perfume.....the beautiful soul garden of immortality....and a treasure of forever love to cherish always...loved reading this one....read it a few times....
Hi. What's in immortality? I guess it would be boring to be immortal... Have you heard about the myth of Sibyl of Cumae? I saw with my own eyes the Sibyl at Cumae hanging in a cage, and when the boys said to her 'Sibyl, what do you want? ' that one replied 'I want to die'. If I were John Donne I would say you and your beloved should say goodbye to earthly love and then start a heavenly love in order to have an immortal love. But I am not Donne! hehe. Anyway people live with their beliefs. And they differ. No problem with it. Good Luck.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a lovely write. excellent. I enjoyed the read