ramesh rai

Gold Star - 25,838 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

Apple - Poem by ramesh rai

Sometime i think
if there was no apple
creation would not be completed

It is the apple
for laying foundation of human race, the begining of an era

Had Adam and Eve not ate the apple, was it possible to see
the existance of Human?

Falling of apple in Newton's garden lead him to the invention of gravitational law

It is the apple, became an unique language of computer

It is the apple
solves all disputes to initialise
as an apple of discord

Certainly, apple is a divine fruit
may give us much more in near future


Comments about Apple by ramesh rai

  • Unwritten Soul (7/27/2017 8:27:00 AM)

    I m not sure the apple that Adam and Eve ate is the same one we have nowadays...i think its different,
    but as i take nothing serious to not understand the beauty of your thoughts, i mean your idea is brillant
    voyaging time to time from past to future, and how apple subject keep making history
    maybe you can add, an apple a day keep doctor away (we used to hear this) .... and Apple is influential technology company now, what will be in the future...so i think you are clever by picking this thought to be served on this table...of observation and poetry...i just yum yum!
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  • Geetha Jayakumar (7/23/2013 8:59:00 AM)

    Wonderful write....if there was no apple......Good poem...Thanks for sharing... (Report) Reply

  • (7/22/2013 11:27:00 AM)

    It's a grand write to behold. (Report) Reply

  • (7/21/2013 7:27:00 PM)

    You have much more than the nutrition value here hahaha. It is witty. I could dream about lovely apples of India by being in America. Thanks friend: -) (Report) Reply

  • Sj Holland (7/20/2013 6:20:00 PM)

    I enjoyed your thoughts about the apple. Nicely written. Simple and easy to follow. (Report) Reply

  • Anamika Jalan (7/19/2013 1:24:00 AM)

    yeah, i deal with it everyday
    a thought provoking poem
    rather a lovely truth
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  • Tribhawan Kaul (7/19/2013 12:31:00 AM)

    A nice analogy on apple. Creation of mankind has always been a subject of deep research. For me an apple a day keeps a doctor away. So far as poem is concerned, It is beautifully written in your own style. (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (7/16/2013 1:15:00 PM)

    If Eve had not eaten the apple, symbolically speaking, man would have remained in a state of ignorance and undeveloped consciousness - as you say, creation would not be completed. Good poem Ramesh. (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (7/16/2013 11:19:00 AM)

    if there was no apple
    Hard to imagine the consequences. Thought provoking poem. Thank you.
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  • Jesus James Llorico (7/16/2013 10:52:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem on apple, also referred as king of all fruits.
    so many histories are written and compared to this fruit.
    truly an excellent write.
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  • Raj Arumugam (7/16/2013 7:17:00 AM)

    a good poem on this amazing fruit, Ramesh (Report) Reply

  • Shahzia Batool (7/16/2013 1:08:00 AM)

    wonderful poem, kindly visit my page for the sequel of this poem i wrote after reading your poem...thanks! ! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, July 15, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, March 24, 2014

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