Atonement Poem by Sathya Narayana
Atonement
It was a broad moon light robbery.
The theft was notified
and the bandit was identified.
Ala, but under the Romantic Penal Code
there is no court and no plaint.
In fact it is the culprit
who is loved the most
and the lost gets the nemesis
of living the life left
in total emptiness!
But, no regrets,
it is atonement
to be bereft of heart!
A beautifully executed word picture. Well done Sathya. Poetry if surely for the full and satisfied life whereever we live. Keep up your production. Greetings from Cornwall U.K.
totally legal but there is beauty of verse..this is an interesting write and a well composed one, it is different and sylish..10 Rema
The theft of the heart is the most heinous crime but has no punishment whatsoever. How smartly you have written this small yet sweet poem. best wishes, arya
Very mysterious and mystical write dear uncle. I am decepted by the fore lines of the write but on knowing the intent that the culprit is loved most I got the heart of the writer. Wonderful. But I understood it in another way too uncle!
I can't think of any words that give this poem the justice it deserves, except...Wow! Such beauty.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 12:23:34 AM # 1.0.0
a well vivid concepts....well done...