Autumn Rhythm Poem by LeeAnn Azzopardi
Autumn Rhythm
That deserted autumn after you died,
I took a walk to the bank
It was warm, but predicting rain
I was becoming wet with perspiration
As my black clothes were soaked with my perfume
Leaving me a chill while I was coming home
But those doughnuts that I bought on the way
Were oh so delicious
I ate them all in one sitting
For my mind craving something sweet
Then, it started to rain, but I didn't care
Watching the leaves fall as I walked home
And when I go there, I drifted into a dream
Until the next day
Hungover with a sugar-coated buzz
Autumn rhythm expressed through such beauty and elegance. Marvellous LeeAnn....10
I can feel your joy in watching the fall of leaves! Magnificent expression with fathomless poetic beauty! Bravo! !
Autumn's rain is never far away, weather are the doughnuts it seems! ! A good 5* poem that makes me feel hungry for doughnuts! !
The rhythm of solitude of Autumn captured in a very beautiful song. Congratulations, LeeAnn. Top score, no doubt!
A poignant and emotionally stirring work, autumn is a time if thoughtful reflection. Ive lost a family member this year so ive had time to think. Bravo LeeAnn
Brilliant blend of nostalgia, longing and loss. One of your finest poems, LeeAnn.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/6/2025 10:04:19 PM # 1.0.0
Our life stories sometimes go with what is in our mind, emotions, day to day occurrences mingled with the rhythm of nature. Beautiful and touching poem with wonderful images.Top Marks.