Awa Odori Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Very well done Ahmad, you feel almost there... Andrew 10

short but rich nice is small like us as human as a small one nice work sir could you plis if oneday you travel around the world tell me and i will accompany thank sir

I wish I am there. well written........10

well written poem! I enjoy reading it.

a nice one! Simply Awa Odori rgds

Nice poem! Sounds interesting! I wish I could visit Japan someday

this poem wakes up in the readers mind a sense of excitement, bringing the sounds of a festival almost audibly to our ears. well done!

Fine thoughts penned beautifully! ......10+++

a happy one, good, we need that from time to time....

I enjoyed the world of excitement potrayed there in Awa Odori.