At a young age its not easy or for us to find the perfect lover. I say we’re in the battle ships stage, see true love has a hit and miss process but once you get all the correct coordinates. Your heart will sink into yours lover’s sea of love. ~ Xeniyah
I agree with Varanasi I would merge as well, but all together I found this a much enjoyed, truthful piece of work.I applaud you for this sense of knowledge at a young age as well.Very well penned.I will check out more of yours and hope you will check out mine.
Making a splash with this one.... keep firing them off buddy! !
i have never thought of it like it but its so true great job keep them coming
a very good way of looking at it. i'm glad you got the correct coordinates, for that bullseye of love. a ten
It fascinates me how you can have such a perfect perspective on things, and put them in words. I agree with this poem, it's truth.
I like how you compare love with a battleship, it's possible and the finished product is great.10+
I love this poem, and the words you picked. It's so true.
I love this.... Its perfect....great choice of words never stop writing^^
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
'Merge' is a more positive word than 'sink'. Nice expression.