I'm weak to stand
But i cant be rude to turn away
I'm weak to hear
But you only curious questioning all
Though our eyes tied in a distance
But our minds separated miles away
Though your lips are soft
But when it opens, it bullets sharp words
Through my chest it shoots my heart
...I bleed without you see it
...my heart stop for seconds
I may fallen if i just stay
Because our minds separated miles away
I've survived
I survive
I'm weak to you
because i hold no perfect answer here
Nor i will satisfy your quest
I replied to warm you
Keep the rest with my silence
Because you will never understand
Because our minds never meet
Resonance of the words challenge me
It may hurt to bleed
But i stand still for you
Because you will live in different road
Then you will never understand
In my silence
I'll stand for many more years without turning away
For you, the distance and innocence, then i endure
Because you will never understand
And you will never
understand
What life i walking in...
Include all of us.. give us wisdom, patience, faith, strength, and great understood to be content... Amen. you explained the situation in a nice and humble way. one can't learn to live in a million ways to satisfy a million, but one and judgment... it will be, in wait.
Thank you for your support, strong words...maybe its not necessary for me to tell about the background of why i wrote this poem, but i just want to tell sometimes that like other people i do have difficult times and it is okay, it is okay because this is human life nothing is so smooth...Yes my dear, my prayers are for all friends too..you all are my bones when i down and i dont want any of you feel down too...so lets be strong together and less angry to what we have facing, instead be wiser to face all challenges, May God bring us the best way as He blessed..for all of us..Amen.
A very insightful social outlook. It seems an outcome of humanist belief. A wave of sincerity can be felt in it. Thank you very much,
Soul, We must all walk upon the best path that lies before us. And when choices present themselves, we must follow that which seems best. At times, is true, others that we care for may be left behind. But along the path of discovery only one path can remain true. Though your feelings may remain sad, you have expressed them in a majestic manner.
A Very Emotionally Felt Poem From Line To Line! ! ! ! ! With Such Power And Strength Behind! ! ! ! ! How Deeply... An Movingly... Written! ! ! ! ! Very Very Powerful One To Readers Hearts! ! ! ! ! And Your Notes On This...Is... Praise God! ! ! ! ! Amen! ! ! ! ! Thank You Soul, Ever So Much For Sharing This Incredible Poem! ! ! ! ! ...... Beyond 10S! ! ! ! !
Sometimes our path we walk is so very different and difficult for anyone to understand. Sometimes the person needs to walk in the same shoes to achieve any comprehension of our lives and where we are coming from. Sometimes silence is the only answer.
If only the human race would stop judging each other and instead actively vividly love each other. Is it so hard to be kind? You'd think so by the amount of cruelty shown even here on PH. Arrogance and self-love seems to motivate some of the comments made that must hurt the recipient. Fortunately these unkind people here are in the minority. We are here to write and learn to write better and encourage others to do the same. Being judged on a personal level is even more damaging, I think. It is hard to remove ourselves from the harping snip-snip-snip of some people's hurtful tongue but if it's coworkers or family or spouses, we are in a huge quandary and I can only recommend prayers for guidance. You have brought this situation to painful life, Soul, may God guard and strengthen the hearts and souls and minds of the bullied. A well-written and valuable poem revealing the desperation and pain of such abominable treatment.. Blessings, dear Soul ...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Feelings and musing expressed so well here. I like the super wording too ESP how u used resonance and the bullets in metaphor as well. Don't care what people say or think as long as u r doing right. Thumbs up. So nice to read from u again.
Yes dear, sometimes i ignore...it just we have strength that weaken day by day and when we reach at the weakest point we may fall too...so thats what i have faced, but to recover is by looking all the options and stay in sober...not by emotion, then we will do right things. Thank you for supporting me, appreciate that :) ..Yes been a while since we have talking, take care and be happy okay :)
Thank you Zaynub, i wish you have greater days and stronger to face life..may happiness on your side