Unwritten Soul

Autumn Swing - Poem by Unwritten Soul

Back to the back
Undo and tracking our footprints
Printed on the sand of time
Reached and stopped at one point
The beginning of earliest thing
Our first meet and Hello greet

Hello world
We keen seed a plant
Sprout the moment, the lesson start
Water my soul you bring me light
With you the life we ride
Deep in core, inside
Grows to root in heart
Hello world
It's been many years we had
But seems like yesterday we been here
The wind still calm, loyal visit our garden
Hope all season life still evergreen not frozen

Time goes fast like a smoke
Thick, thin, disappear
We smile we cry, branching emotion in vessels
Patiently we waiting to smell the scent of happy
Life not easy but we learn new lesson daily
Branches becomes stronger day by day
Stronger construct history today
Dig deep by root, taller, up by shoot
Life so mystery but can be understood

Green leaf symbols of living
Each one, each day we been talking
One day we gained or leaving
Day by day, Oh World
Who thought we passed years
We changed by now and we still
To be now a shady tree
Against the storm or a safe home
The best shelter of nightingale
And we learn how to sing beautiful tale
At least apples ripen accompany

Time running just like a smoke
Dense, smear, disappear
Now, here, today will be another memory
Seasons of life, chapter of our story
Green leaf will change to yellow or brown glory
Feel blue, past leave yellow history
Time so fast, if wrong, say my sorry

Green leaves won't leave a grieve
Together this color we folded in our lifestory
Enveloped in leaves of remembrance
And sand of time bringing changes again
Seal with red to yellow, fade out the blue
The old green one day be the past hue

Gentle breeze drift them away
Fall down, the leaves
fall me with the miss
As the autumn comes again
The memories fly away
We missing and missed
but the wind we love still

The moments we now shared
Rooted in heart, ever-last to exhale
The joy, the smile, the cry and pain
In each branches, vessel and vein
We passed the past, memory make it last
The colors only changed but still so intense
All...Enveloped in leaves of remembrance
Just not green only red or yellow remain
Once we live it fresh as green but now
To the red, brown to yellow it changed
I sat and think life is about to change
The significant why memory remain

Autumn wind take all away
Falling all the red leaves
Falling me, for something i missed
The wind touch again, on this skin
Kiss me cold remind, warm past rewind
But this life-tales we love still
Autumn come again to swing this feel

Hello world,
The seed we plant
Swing me back to memories
When the first time i touch life flowers
I enjoyed and sweetly cry
When the branches broken in vein
I cried my salty cry

Now i learn shoot will replace anew
As new day we keep growing too
The lost green will fade away
The past cant forever stay
We might lost beautiful red, yellow part
But forever memory warming in my heart
I will remember as blue disperse remarks.

Falling down those leaves
falling me, this miss
All behind was around and round
Leaves falling down on the ground
Like our memories, matured, beautiful brown
I'll wait for the time, when everything is back
Beginning of a new story
For new branches to grow
And bring green back home
I smiled and creating new footprints to remember
...........for one day i will return

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The poem is about these three things, i make it to tell in diverse meaning..hope fully it works
1. The memory and story of life that symbolized as a leaf..losing it may cause a miss
2. The time, is like the story of our life and history...Hello is intro when we was born and life
bring some another greet as we grow and changed by time
3. Dedication to a friend, which evergreen in heart
I imagine that we start something like a hello, we plant it and grow
deep in heart...

Autumn Swing is about...
'what all of us having now, current is green..so fresh color of living..this moment we are constructing memories for old days sooner...Then the memories in the making are green as it in present tense and all folded in a leaf...The green will fade as time we will leave...it turn to yellow, red and brown (color of memory) we miss the blue (color of peace) ..The green colors have two complexions (element of green=blue+yellow) mean (live in current=peace and memory. As the leaf lost the green and turn yellow, it means the blue and memory depart each other...When the autumn comes, the wind blows and the leave fall...the fall of the leave=miss because the memory just far away from tree which planted in heart..deep rooted in heart :)

The colors, from green to red-yellow fade to blue meaning as well as this
(blue+yellow=green) ...blue=serene, yellow=memory, green=life and fresh. Hope you can feel connected to one of these or any reason
Thanks for reading and Autumn just coming, enjoy it..! ! Keep smiling
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Comments about Autumn Swing by Unwritten Soul

  • Patricia Grantham (7/30/2013 6:48:00 AM)

    I especially like the title of this poem Autumn Swing. You wrote this
    poem just like the moves in a hypnotic dance. The lines blend in so
    smooth to make for a beautiful write. Life changes just like the seasons.
    New things come to life as old things dies. There is a constant rebirth
    as long as the world exists. Nothing ever stays the same, so does life.
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  • Heather Wilkins (6/21/2013 1:05:00 PM)

    a great metaphor very poetic. (Report) Reply

  • (4/2/2013 5:56:00 PM)

    Your lovely poetic comparisons and lavish, effective imagery make Autumn Swing a gratifying reading experience.
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  • Captain Cur (6/15/2012 7:15:00 AM)

    Another very emotive poem that uses strong metaphoric
    images and colors to entice and challenge the reader.
    An ingenious blending of many flavors that did not spoil the stew.
    Great write.
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  • Neela Nath Das (6/11/2012 12:51:00 PM)

    The similes, metaphors are used very nicely.Shades of color denoting the stages of memory are woven nicely..Awesome! (Report) Reply

  • (11/26/2011 11:02:00 AM)

    strong, passionate, the hymn of life exploding within and without... the seasons of living and love... well penned! (Report) Reply

  • Cosmic Dreamer (11/11/2011 8:37:00 PM)

    A vivid dream painted in words... Great poem... (Report) Reply

  • (11/10/2011 11:41:00 AM)

    Dear poetess you rocked I say! you have made it wholesome. I like your approach and the development of ideas.
    'Time running just like a smoke
    Dense, smear, disappear'

    Poem is planned well and drafted well I tried pick some lines very tough job as so many line so fascinating! - especially the implication of colors.. green, yellow.....................

    Good my mind summoned back to my university days where I studied P.B. Shelly's Ode to Autumn. Good work.10++++++++
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  • (10/22/2011 6:49:00 AM)

    Such a very creative and in vivid write, great piece. (Report) Reply

  • Bernard Snyder (10/17/2011 11:41:00 PM)

    Another amazing piece of writing 'Soul! This one sounds more 'Shakespearean! ! With more definition and much more polished though. Nicely written! I gave this one a 10' as well. (Report) Reply

  • (10/10/2011 9:03:00 AM)

    This is so good. Great meaning, sad, melancholy yet happy and reflective...loved it my lil bro'
    -Dr SG! ! !
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  • Allemagne Roßmann (10/2/2011 12:19:00 PM)

    This is undoubtedly and undisputedly one of the epic writes of poemhunter and time.An Autumn perhaps never had such an Ode before your words here.I wandered in thoughts and for a moment silence ruled the time while i forgot i actually read it from start to end in each stanzas A to B to C and their coherence so well established in a matured poetic hand...Superb write i must say here.. (Report) Reply

  • (10/2/2011 2:41:00 AM)

    Great sense of regret apathy and lost....But why do you write the themes? ...Let it be vague to the readers (Report) Reply

  • (9/30/2011 11:44:00 PM)

    This is a magnificent poem, with a deep meaning, Very well written! An amazing poem from an amazing poet :) (Report) Reply

  • Pranab K Chakraborty (9/26/2011 10:10:00 PM)

    A good writing to guide the life in a positive way to reach a happiest end. Nice blending of Autumn put the nature within. Thank you. Write more...
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  • Hans Vr (9/26/2011 8:08:00 AM)

    I think this poem's images are very well chosen
    the seeds, the leaves, the colours
    Very meaningful
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  • Raj Arumugam (9/25/2011 2:25:00 PM)

    beautiful lines and extensive imagery on a universal topic, Unwritten Soul... (Report) Reply

  • (9/25/2011 6:23:00 AM)

    i love the way you have put the feeling from you heart into soft sweet words keep this up are are really good (Report) Reply

  • (9/24/2011 1:46:00 AM)

    The description in the end helped understanding the poem...its good you did that. Of all the four season i believe autumn is very unique and so magical..i'm glad you wrote something like this with the flavour of autumn.....Good one unwritten soul...but it could have sound more better than this. (Report) Reply

  • Naida Nepascua Supnet (9/22/2011 5:28:00 PM)

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 20, 2011

Poem Edited: Sunday, September 25, 2011

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