Because You'll Never Understand Poem by Unwritten Soul

Because You'll Never Understand

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I'm weak to stand
But i cant be rude to turn away
I'm weak to hear
But you only curious questioning all

Though our eyes tied in a distance
But our minds separated miles away
Though your lips are soft
But when it opens, it bullets sharp words
Through my chest it shoots my heart
...I bleed without you see it
...my heart stop for seconds

I may fallen if i just stay
Because our minds separated miles away
I've survived
I survive

I'm weak to you
because i hold no perfect answer here
Nor i will satisfy your quest
I replied to warm you
Keep the rest with my silence
Because you will never understand
Because our minds never meet

Resonance of the words challenge me
It may hurt to bleed
But i stand still for you
Because you will live in different road
Then you will never understand

In my silence
I'll stand for many more years without turning away
For you, the distance and innocence, then i endure
Because you will never understand
And you will never
understand

What life i walking in...

Friday, June 30, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: judgement
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote this today, thinking of how sometimes i faced a hard situation and emotionally pressured by what people think from the choice i have taken. To explain all life struggles, experience, dreams and all part of things are not easy when it comes to different mind set. Judgement is belong to others but we do run our life based on what road it leads us...i dont get angry for what they thoughts and say, because they dont know, far to understand...so why should we angry, they dont know..they just dont get it. What i ask from God, give me wisdom, patience, faith, strength and great understanding to be a content person...Amen
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 02 July 2017

Feelings and musing expressed so well here. I like the super wording too ESP how u used resonance and the bullets in metaphor as well. Don't care what people say or think as long as u r doing right. Thumbs up. So nice to read from u again.

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Unwritten Soul 03 July 2017

Yes dear, sometimes i ignore...it just we have strength that weaken day by day and when we reach at the weakest point we may fall too...so thats what i have faced, but to recover is by looking all the options and stay in sober...not by emotion, then we will do right things. Thank you for supporting me, appreciate that :) ..Yes been a while since we have talking, take care and be happy okay :)

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Unwritten Soul 03 July 2017

Thank you Zaynub, i wish you have greater days and stronger to face life..may happiness on your side

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Mj Lemon 02 July 2017

The emotions and feelings are really flowing in this gem. The words 'bullets sharp words' will stay with me. I had to pause and reread several times. A great work, Soul.

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Unwritten Soul 03 July 2017

Hi Dear, i dont know if it was good it just i feel so bruised...like its hurt but you have more things to do in your life than reacting, it is to lead your life the right path that you feel free and blessed..I feel blessed because so many friends here know me better than many out there, because here is always part of me that i never show..and friends like you are remedy, that heal without you see where my bruises are...and my thoughts always be somewhere in firework when no one see when i smile..I pray to God for you and to all my precious friends here...a great life, if past wasnt then must be from now and then... :) thanks dear

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Jazib Kamalvi 05 August 2017

A very insightful social outlook. It seems an outcome of humanist belief. A wave of sincerity can be felt in it. Thank you very much,

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Captain Cur 31 July 2017

Soul, We must all walk upon the best path that lies before us. And when choices present themselves, we must follow that which seems best. At times, is true, others that we care for may be left behind. But along the path of discovery only one path can remain true. Though your feelings may remain sad, you have expressed them in a majestic manner.

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Rebecca Navarre 22 July 2017

A Very Emotionally Felt Poem From Line To Line! ! ! ! ! With Such Power And Strength Behind! ! ! ! ! How Deeply... An Movingly... Written! ! ! ! ! Very Very Powerful One To Readers Hearts! ! ! ! ! And Your Notes On This...Is... Praise God! ! ! ! ! Amen! ! ! ! ! Thank You Soul, Ever So Much For Sharing This Incredible Poem! ! ! ! ! ...... Beyond 10S! ! ! ! !

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Simone Inez Harriman 13 July 2017

Sometimes our path we walk is so very different and difficult for anyone to understand. Sometimes the person needs to walk in the same shoes to achieve any comprehension of our lives and where we are coming from. Sometimes silence is the only answer.

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Susan Williams 09 July 2017

If only the human race would stop judging each other and instead actively vividly love each other. Is it so hard to be kind? You'd think so by the amount of cruelty shown even here on PH. Arrogance and self-love seems to motivate some of the comments made that must hurt the recipient. Fortunately these unkind people here are in the minority. We are here to write and learn to write better and encourage others to do the same. Being judged on a personal level is even more damaging, I think. It is hard to remove ourselves from the harping snip-snip-snip of some people's hurtful tongue but if it's coworkers or family or spouses, we are in a huge quandary and I can only recommend prayers for guidance. You have brought this situation to painful life, Soul, may God guard and strengthen the hearts and souls and minds of the bullied. A well-written and valuable poem revealing the desperation and pain of such abominable treatment.. Blessings, dear Soul ...

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